Reviews For Sydney
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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2009 06:43 pm Title: Bring Your Child to Work Day

Congrats on your first story here!  I really enjoyed it - your Michael was spot-on, the cat references for Angela were perfect and who wouldn't love Sydney. Hope we see more from you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Writing Michael was challenging but fun, I'm glad you think I did well with it. I hope to do more soon, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2009 02:21 pm Title: Bring Your Child to Work Day

Great first fic. My only suggestion would be sending your work to a beta for grammar/spelling mistakes, but the story itself was very cute

Author's Response: Thanks! I was a little confused on how the beta thing worked since it's my first time, but now I understand how and I'll ask someone to beta my next story.

Reviewer: nandance Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2009 10:26 am Title: Bring Your Child to Work Day

Aww, how adorable! This was an awesome story, especially for your first fanfic! I can totally see a day like this happening in the Office Universe if/when Jim and Pam have a child. I love how you made little Sydney a perfect mix between her mother and father. I really hope you do continue this!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I think I am going to continue :)

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