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Reviewer: CashBasket Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2007 04:19 am Title: Hi Ho, etc.

heheh. go find your inner dwarf.

Reviewer: vfdj42 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2007 05:38 pm Title: Team Building

Perfect. So perfect.

Reviewer: vfdj42 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2007 05:38 pm Title: Team Building

Perfect. So perfect.

Author's Response: Wow.  Thanks for the kind words

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2007 09:54 am Title: Hi Ho, etc.

Aww!  Clown day is just priceless.  And Karen and Toby dressed alike.  Nice.

Author's Response: Couldn't you just see Dwight dressed as a sad clown in camo?  With Karen and Toby I might be putting a square peg in a round hole, but both characters need somebody to make them see the good parts of life.  Just a thought.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2007 09:35 pm Title: Hi Ho, etc.

I really like that Jim comes to an art show and gets it!

Author's Response: Sappy I know,  but I enjoyed writing it.  Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2007 09:33 pm Title: Hi Ho, etc.

How nice!  The line about breathing like a frog is really funny.  I like the Toby/Karen dynamic, and Pam's line about letting her know when he doesn't feel like an ass.  Also, how only Jim has no trouble sleeping!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2007 08:39 am Title: Team Building

Ryan ducked behind a tree. Kelly looked in the direction of the shot and saw Dwight. "You shot me in the boob you jerk!"

Too funny, and I can totally imagine Kelly saying that. Cute story!



Author's Response:

Something similar actually happened to one of my friends while she was in a paintball game.  I thought is suited Ryan and Kelly.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Hi Ho, etc.

Ok, I REALLY love this.  The characterizations are great, and the story is moving along nicely.  So, in short - yay! great story.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind words!

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 07:30 pm Title: Hi Ho, etc.

"She wondered if Kelly could breathe through her skin like a frog." - I think you may have stumbled upon the explanation!  So simple, yet so brilliant!

Author's Response: Not only can she breathe through her skin, she also has jumping ability to put Kobe Bryant to shame.

Reviewer: Office Elly Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 02:26 pm Title: Hi Ho, etc.

Yay, sequel! So next we'll get clowns? Can't wait.

The hypnosis thing felt like a stretch, plot-wise--apparently I'm a skeptic about hypnosis, who knew?--but I loved where you went with it (the one thing he couldn't remember was "happy").

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it was something of a stretch.  But for some reason the seven dwarves got stuck in my head, and I couldn't think of happy to save myself.  I thought it might be a good device to use in a Jim/Karen to Jim/Pam story and this was the best I could do

Reviewer: Office Elly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Team Building

This was so funny. I could picture it in my head just like an extra episode. Voices--spot on. Things I loved... Angela shooting Kevin (three times!), Jim and Pam's understated moment while putt-putt golfing (and then they both prayed it was a "Pepsi-only place," heh), Jim not shooting Pam, Andy losing it (of course), Michael chatting up the referee. The ref's talking head was my favorite of many funny talking heads: "Yeah, I think I'm quitting after today. I'd like to work with a higher class of people... Maybe I'll be a stripper." Loved it!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.  Thanks for reviewing.  I liked writing the coed character.  Maybe I should have added more between her and Michael.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Hi Ho, etc.

Fun!!!  Kelly the five-year-old is especially nice.


Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.  Kelly's voice is hard for me, so I'm glad you liked her.

Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Team Building

"I guess I win," Creed said.

Too funny.



Author's Response: Creed is a lot of fun to write because you can make him say almost anything.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Binxbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 08:04 pm Title: Team Building

Creed: Which one is Ryan?

 

Hilarious. Karen and Toby.... interesting! Dwight and Andy were hysterical.

I loved this. Wish there was more!!



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.  I only just noticed that there was a way to respond to reviews.  I know, not really very observant.  I think Karen and Toby could compliment each other.  Course I could be wrong.

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