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Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2008 01:31 pm Title: After the fireworks

good smut! You did just fine, haha, trust me!

Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04, 2008 09:12 pm Title: After the fireworks

Your text/phone conversations are so great...and the smut's not bad either. Really looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04, 2008 08:14 am Title: After the fireworks

A+ once again!

Reviewer: jbklover Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2008 01:05 pm Title: After the fireworks

I loved it - short, sweet, hot, perfect

Author's Response: You've only commented on the smutty chapters. I guess you liked those best. I am certainly flattered, and you were the only one to comment on the celebration and punishment chapter. I'm glad someone liked it enough to drop me a line. Plus thanks for the stars. You brought me back up to five from four and a half. Love you for it!

Reviewer: jbklover Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2008 12:59 pm Title: After the fireworks

yes, the phone sex WAS nice. You are TOO good at this. continue....

Author's Response: You are TOO kind! But thank you I'm blushing. I shall continue.

Reviewer: jbklover Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2008 12:51 pm Title: After the fireworks

oh my my my, yes, you can write smut!and you need to write more now! excellent - can definitely envision Jim and John doing that... oh thank you. and don't stop !

Author's Response: Thank you. Writing smut is a new talent that I have discovered. I didn't relize I was good at it until all of you reviewers have been so kind to tell me. Thank you for the feedback. I really appreciate it. I hope you'll chime in with more reviews in future chapters.

Reviewer: fashion_show_at_lunch Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 09:43 pm Title: After the fireworks

yay. I loved that little, "what do you want to do?", "...you." part

Author's Response: What a cute name you have. Thank you for leaving me a review. I hope you've liked it so far and will continue to let me know how you think it's going.

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2008 03:18 pm Title: After the fireworks

You keep me wantin more!

Author's Response: Awww I heart you I heartstanley. I hope you'll keep letting me know how you think my story is going.

Reviewer: RomanCandle Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2008 12:30 pm Title: After the fireworks

Since you were so nice in your review of my story, I thought it was only fair to read your magnum opus. It's very good! My favorite parts were the new company slogan and "Jim-enese". Also, the smut.

Author's Response: Thanks for your nice review. I really appreciate it. Glad you liked the smut. There's more where that came from to come.

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 03:34 pm Title: After the fireworks

Great Job!

B



Author's Response: Thanks B

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 03:28 pm Title: After the fireworks

I got a comment for you...This chapter was Smutalicious!

Awesome,

You are very descriptive and great Imagination!

My cape almost fell off!

Batman!



Author's Response: Thanks, Smutalicious I'm blushing. You rock batman29. I hope you keep letting me know what you think.

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 02:27 pm Title: After the fireworks

You should be a writer you make me want more!!

Author's Response: I heart you iheartstanley. You are always so sweet with your reviews. I apreciate it.

Reviewer: MelissaKrasinski Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 09:57 am Title: After the fireworks

thought about it. i love it.

Author's Response: Thanks Ms. Krasinski.

Reviewer: Dundie All-Star Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 08:26 pm Title: After the fireworks

Short and smutty, just right. Hehe. I loved the motivation you gave for her, that he looked so tired and just needed to relax, and she wanted to help him with that. The actual smut part was excellent too; definitely along the lines of poetic in terms of the language you used. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm also working on a new story I hope to post soon. It is a first date story. Very smoldering hot with similar poetic themes. Thank you for your feedback. Now I know I'm on the right track.

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 07:56 pm Title: After the fireworks

you need more smut in this story.

Author's Response: More? I guess that means you liked it. I aim to please. More to cum.

Reviewer: MelissaKrasinski Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 02:29 pm Title: After the fireworks

it was very niiiiice. [/borat]

Author's Response: Thank you I am prostitte for feedback. It is like whore in your country. (Borat)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 01:42 pm Title: After the fireworks

I have no complaints about the smut.

Author's Response: sweet.

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 12:12 pm Title: After the fireworks

That was pretty hot. I've been keeping up with this story and I'm really sorry for not reviewing sooner. After posting a nearly unreplied chapter myself I can understand and you should definately plan on hearing from me more often.

Author's Response: Thanks for giving me feedback. It means a lot to know people are enjoying my story. This is my first attempt at fan fic. Everyone had been so kind. I will be sure to read your story.

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2008 08:31 pm Title: After the fireworks

This story makes me want more so please do!

Reviewer: Dundie All-Star Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2008 05:48 pm Title: After the fireworks

Great job! I loved your descriptions of their feelings, Pam's feelings in particular. You really got across that she was full of doubt and even a little scared. I loved how Jim could sweep her off her feet though. Soo fluffy. Next chapter soon please!

Author's Response: Your continued reading and feedback on this story have been great. I really do appreciate it. It's so nice when someone takes the time to review your story, isn't it? You can never tell if people are into it unless they comment. I mean it looks like this story has been clicked on over 20,000 times but I only got feedback from 15 members. Thanks for appreciating all the emotion I tried to convey in voice over. I wasn't sure if it was soo over the top. Anyway more to come later ;-)

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2008 09:01 pm Title: After the fireworks

I am really enjoying this! Good work.

Reviewer: Dundie All-Star Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2008 03:19 pm Title: After the fireworks

Love this one! What a great idea; I love the saleslady's 'what a way to go.' It most certainly is. And I liked that you included the part about not upgrading the ring. I agree that it would mean more if she knew he bought it when he didn't have his nice new salary. Great chapter! More please!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Dundie All-star. I'm a jewelry artist and it occurred to me that this would be a great way to strtch out the prank proposals. Glad you liked it. Hope to hear from you again.

Reviewer: dentalhydraplostion Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2008 03:45 am Title: After the fireworks

I love love love your story! All of it seems just like the show and whenever I read it my heart just turns to goo (in a good way if that is possible) because you have the best JAM moments! Please Please Please write more soon!

Author's Response: Awwwwwww. Thanks. More good goey bits to come promise.

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2008 01:50 am Title: After the fireworks

loved it...love the idea of how he is going to propose, but maybe not drag it out for more than a week...idk...can't wait for more

Author's Response: I am so sorry and this might bring me trouble and bad feedback but it's going to be a while before Jim does it for real. But I have the idea all maped out and I think it will be worth the wait. Hope you can stand it.

Reviewer: Dundie All-Star Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2008 07:59 pm Title: After the fireworks

I love this so much! The idea of him getting the job works so well, it makes me wonder if they'll do something like that one the show! You do a really great job of including everyone in the story as well, so it's not all about Jim and Pam. I mean, you even got Creed in there! And I think I laughed out loud when Pam texted "kiboshed the shrine huh:-(" Magical. There were so many amazing moments in this, smut, humor, and awkwardness included. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you I am touched. Glad you are liking all the aspects. There's way more to go keep checking in. I really appreciate the comments.

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