7 [Report This]Date: April 17, 2008 07:44 am Title: Not Going There
I enjoyed the great banter between them. It's a really cute piece.
Date: March 01, 2007 06:43 pm Title: Not Going There
Any amy fic with a mention of loins burning for the almighty Schrute is okay by me. As long as it's meant to be funny.
Date: January 28, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Not Going There
haha, very funny ending! but now i have this image of the almight schrute in my head...
Date: January 28, 2007 10:50 am Title: Not Going There
Hee! Dwight & Jim -- OTP!
10 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2007 06:42 am Title: Not Going There
Hey that was really great-- as others have said you have the characters perfectly. So...if this is your second, will you post the first one? Pretty please? :) And-- write more!
Date: January 28, 2007 01:41 am Title: Not Going There
Hah! That was adorable!
Date: January 27, 2007 10:03 pm Title: Not Going There
Oh, I can SO see this type of conversation happening. I loved this line:
"God, he was getting sick of lying"
and this one: "Pam had gotten to be quite the expert at putting out particular awkward fires"
Oh Jim and Pam. You had them in character very [/jim] well though. Great little fic!
Date: January 27, 2007 08:57 pm Title: Not Going There
This made me laugh. And I needed to laugh right now.
So thank you very much.
And it's possible that I might need to make a "Mrs. Jim Schrute" icon.
hee.
cheers.
--Lex
10 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 08:56 pm Title: Not Going There
WOW. seriously only your second TO fic? cuz that was pretty awesome! funny and squirmy uncomfortable at the same time.. just like the show!
10 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 06:57 pm Title: Not Going There
aww...i don't think this is amateur! I thought it was really good! It was a great way to show how Jim and Pam can still have that plafullness they did in last season without it ending in happily ever after that would be unrealistic on the show.
Date: January 27, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Not Going There
Very well done! The only 'bumpy' spot for me was this line:
Pam laughed, looking up from her shoes as she laughed, shaking her head.
It might read better as "Pam laughed, looking up from the scuff mark on her right shoe as she did so . . "
I think you very nicely captured Jim, Pam, and their dynamic. Thank you for a fun story! Scrantonback indeed . . . %P
9 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 05:22 pm Title: Not Going There
The voices and dialogue were spot on! Not amateurish at all...
Also, I loved the awkward bit at the end.
Date: January 27, 2007 05:17 pm Title: Not Going There
Awesome. You must write more stories. You're Jim/Pam interaction is spot on.
Date: January 27, 2007 05:10 pm Title: Not Going There
Nice. I like this Jim/Pam interaction. I could definitely see them having this conversation after The Return. And the little awkward bit at the end ... oooh. :