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Reviewer: Bailey08 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love this.  You need to write Ryan/Kelly more often.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2007 06:31 am Title: Chapter 1

This is just so Ryan and Kelly! What an accurate portrait of a completely dysfunctional relationship. I love how Ryan pretends he's the victim when he's actually making out pretty well in this deal - Xbox, constant flow of hot sex, free tickets to a Christina Aguilera concert... hee! Awesome.

Reviewer: injoy Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

i think, overall, you've got a good piece here.  the characters seem real and the situations, too.  only, perhaps blasting McLusky while reading this wasn't a good idea.  respect.

Reviewer: Pseudonym Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

I never really *get* Ryan and Kelly as a couple (I don't think we see enough of them together, especially not lately), so I love this-- the two of them suddenly make sense to me, all because of you!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 09:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay, a Kelly/Ryan fic that isn't all about the angst! A fun read, and I particularly liked the one with the lost ring.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 08:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, another peek into the secret lives of Kelly & Ryan.  "I don't know, I can't explain it"  I think I like the Diwali one best.  Zach Braff -- ha!

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 08:08 am Title: Chapter 1

Hee!  I love me some Ryan/Kelly :)

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 04:39 am Title: Chapter 1

There really is something intrinsically sexy about the Kelly/Ryan thing...if you know where to find it. And clearly you do. This works because you project them perfectly into these situations - totally in character, especially long suffering Ryan. And just explicit enough, without being graphic for graphic's sake.

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2007 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice.  I liked all of these.  The little bits about Kelly's life (having rich parents), Ryan getting an Xbox for Christmas, and Ryan being mean to Jim!  Awesome.

BTW:  Don't ask me why I know this (I will mumble something about reading "too many US Weekly" magazines), but it's Zach Braff.

Author's Response: Ooh, good catch.  That was a dumb typo and I feel stupid because I consider Zach Braff to be my second TV boyfriend.  Thanks for pointing that out!  That's what I get for thinking I'm too cool for using a beta in this one!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2007 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Woo!  Kelly/Ryan AND Smutfic rolled into one tasty bit of Five Things?  I'm a happy girl!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2007 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good stuff as usual, lady!  Make sure bailey08 sees this one; she'll love it!

Reviewer: fireworkfiasco Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

OH YOU. Stop with the awesome already. Or...not. Seriously, I'm considering paying you to write more. it. :D Amazing. Of course.

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