Date: January 30, 2007 06:31 am Title: Chapter 1
This is just so Ryan and Kelly! What an accurate portrait of a completely dysfunctional relationship. I love how Ryan pretends he's the victim when he's actually making out pretty well in this deal - Xbox, constant flow of hot sex, free tickets to a Christina Aguilera concert... hee! Awesome.
Date: January 28, 2007 04:39 am Title: Chapter 1
There really is something intrinsically sexy about the Kelly/Ryan thing...if you know where to find it. And clearly you do. This works because you project them perfectly into these situations - totally in character, especially long suffering Ryan. And just explicit enough, without being graphic for graphic's sake.
Date: January 27, 2007 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice. I liked all of these. The little bits about Kelly's life (having rich parents), Ryan getting an Xbox for Christmas, and Ryan being mean to Jim! Awesome.
BTW: Don't ask me why I know this (I will mumble something about reading "too many US Weekly" magazines), but it's Zach Braff.
Author's Response: Ooh, good catch. That was a dumb typo and I feel stupid because I consider Zach Braff to be my second TV boyfriend. Thanks for pointing that out! That's what I get for thinking I'm too cool for using a beta in this one!
Date: January 27, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH YOU. Stop with the awesome already. Or...not. Seriously, I'm considering paying you to write more. Just...do it. :D Amazing. Of course.