Date: December 21, 2006 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
*sniff* That was beautiful. I love love love the ending. I can so see her doing that and getting courage from it. Wonderful stuff!
Date: September 14, 2006 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so beautifully intense and full of emotion, it made me cry.
Date: September 05, 2006 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1
How did I miss this? Achingly awesome -- great job.
Date: August 15, 2006 06:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, how had I missed this before?? I really like it -- the little, ordinary, everyday moments, because that's what *makes* Jim/Pam, and the lovely, linked moments of her spinning in her chair, and their banter, and the way they understand each other, even at the end. I'm particularly fond of the Email Surveillance one, because there *is* so much she doesn't know about his life, and it's interesting to see it thrown into relief, there, and I like how you echo their falling out around "Boys and Girls" within this framework.
Date: July 16, 2006 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic! Completely heartbreaking but realistic and compelling! Love.
Date: July 16, 2006 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I must just be weepy - or this must be that good. Actually - I'm going with both.
Author's Response: Thanks dude. We gotta stop making each other weepy. I think some good fluffy panty fic is in order. What do you say?
Date: July 16, 2006 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH! The sprinkler scene. Water drops and thumbs on wrists and unclipping barrettes... Eeeee :) Each one of these was perfect. You've created a great range of mood and of tension. Love it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. The sprinkler scene grew out of my pure unadulterated need to just write about WetJim. It's fun isn't it?
Date: July 16, 2006 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
And itís the first time theyíve really been alone, away from the cameras, away from the office and itís not nearly as strange as it should be.
I love that line. Nicely done, Shannanagan as always.
Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot coming from you.