Date: May 16, 2008 08:50 am Title: The Club
please, please, please finish this! it's so fantastic!
Date: November 25, 2007 06:01 pm Title: Mistakes
Okay, at first i didn't really think I would like this story. And even though that sounds like an insult, i assure you that it is a testiment to your story telling skilz (yes, with a 'z'), because now, after finishing this chapter, i LOVE this story. I am completly hooked. And as such, i beg you to please, please update this story. Please. I must know what happens. What's going to happen to Pam? Is she ok? Where did Jim go? Was it just that he did loose his phone? Is he going to come back? What about Roy? What about JimandPam? Is there going to be a JimandPam? I need to know. Please update. Please.
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2007 11:49 pm Title: The Club
This seems unfinished. I am hoping there will be more ...
Date: March 01, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Mistakes
Ok, I've read this far and am hooked! I really like that the characterization feels true to character even in such an AU situation. Can't wait for the next part!
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2007 07:43 am Title: Mistakes
I SO miss this story :( ..... Will there be more ??
Author's Response: Yes yes it's definitely not finished.. I've been really busy lately but I'm hoping to get out a new chapter within the next few days!
9 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2007 06:47 pm Title: The Club
This story is freaking amazing. So HOT and also touching and sad. Can't wait to see where this is all going. Great job!!
8 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2007 02:02 pm Title: The Club
Hope to see more of this story...you are doing a great job.
Date: February 13, 2007 11:50 am Title: Mistakes
Jim Halpert, Knight in Shining Armor. Awesome.
Date: February 13, 2007 11:00 am Title: Mistakes
why did he leave? she neeeeeds him! he needs to come back!!
9 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2007 08:18 am Title: Mistakes
ok, great chapter, i finally got to the damsel in distress part. Poor Pam, I hope Jim will forgive her.
Date: February 13, 2007 08:08 am Title: Mistakes
Oh Jim, what happened? We need more of this please
Date: February 13, 2007 07:51 am Title: The Club
You weren't kidding about dark! Yikes! Can't wait for the update.
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2007 07:01 am Title: The Club
This story just keep's getting better & better.....!!!!! Love it..... Next chapter PLEASE !!!!! :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2007 09:26 am Title: The Club
OMG... I love take control Jim...This story is so HOT....Keep up the fantastic work !!!! Can't wait to see what happen's next!!
Date: February 11, 2007 05:05 pm Title: Chinese Food and Flava Flav
As Kelly would say, "AMAAAAAAAAAAZING!"
10 [Report This]Date: February 10, 2007 11:12 pm Title: Chinese Food and Flava Flav
Oh. My Guh. I might be a little drunk, but I still know that this is AMAZINGLY hot. I love it. And you for writing it.
Author's Response: I love that your drunk and reading fanfic. We should hang out.
Date: February 10, 2007 10:17 pm Title: The Club
I love this story but question: so Jim just turned 21? how was he on a reality tv show at dunder-mifflin a few years ago? And Pam is in her late 20s?
A truly nominal point, but this story is H-O-T
Author's Response: Dammit. Good point.
I guess I will have to change that. Thanks hahah
Author's Response: Alright... So I realized the only place I had him as 21 was the story summary. It is not his 21st birthday. He's in his late twenties... fixed. Sorry! haha
Date: February 10, 2007 03:39 pm Title: The Bar
What a gentleman our Jim is!
Date: February 10, 2007 12:32 am Title: The Bar
Umm...I really didn't expect to get into this story. I read the premise and thought "huh?"...BUT, I really like it, I mean really. I love how you have Pam owning her sexuality, but still retaining "Pam" characteristics. And Jim (oh Jim) is still so him. (just a tiny bit reminiscent of Don Quixote and Dulcinea).
Love it - can't wait for more.
Date: February 09, 2007 11:46 pm Title: The Bar
I am really digging this story. Sexy and sweet.
10 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2007 08:18 pm Title: The Bar
aww, such a sweet chapter! I really want to hear more about Roy though, I guess you'll get to that. Can't wait to read what happens in the morning.
Date: February 09, 2007 04:42 pm Title: The Bar
Well, that's one hot read for sure! Normally I'd run away screaming from a fic where the main heroine is a hooker, but I'm really enjoying this piece. Can't wait to see where it goes. And props for making the hot-and-bothered-Jim scenes so sexy AND classy.
Date: February 09, 2007 02:34 pm Title: The Bar
Keep um coming, keep um coming. Don't make me tie you to a chair
Date: February 09, 2007 12:54 pm Title: The Dance
I don't know how you are doing it - but you are making me believe in Stripper!Pam.
This was particularly awesome:
She usually avoided looking in their eyes, it would make her feel too sheer… too transparent.
Their "date" is too cute. Can't wait to see what's next!
Date: February 09, 2007 12:27 pm Title: The Dance
So glad you updated. This is a really interesting AU. And nice wrench to throw in things--Roy is still around! Gah!