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Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2009 11:57 am Title: Chapter 1

awww that was sooo cute, I'm swooning

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww gushes at Jim and his cheeks =)

Reviewer: Strider Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2008 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, that was sweet! I'm impressed that you got a whole chapter out of his cheeks!

--Strider

Reviewer: theProgidalSon Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2007 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

i like it i love it i want some more of it

Author's Response: Are you listening to country music?  ;-)  Next in the series: Jim's forearms - where have they gone?

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2007 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Your explanation for Jim's gauntness was very believable, and the cheek-o-meter had me laughing out loud. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks - here's hoping those cheeks are back in full force by the end of this season.

Reviewer: lano Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2007 03:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I loved this line: He felt like black and white compared to her color wheel.  Sweet fic, Moxie :)

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much!  Of course, what I like most is that from Pam's view, she probably didn't feel quite that colorful.  But Jim thought she was because he's so crazy about her. (the sap!) ;-)

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow...love the hussy shout-out.  Very cute.


Author's Response: thanks so much~!

Reviewer: Claire Danes Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw, so cute!  Is it bad that I really like the other cheeks, too?

Author's Response: Not at all - but that's another fanfic waiting to be written! ;-)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

The only way to get The Measure of (my) Happiness reading this story would be on a scale that weighs tractor-trailers!  So sweet and so them.

Author's Response: aw, thanks, kaystar!  I appreciate the feedback, because I think there's a fine line between fluffy and sappy. If the story keeps their chemistry intact, it's fluffy.   If it goes too far - it's sappy, and nobody wants that.  ;-)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Adorableness x 10.  Gotta love those cheeks.  :)

Author's Response: thanks x 100!!  I tell you, it's easy to get inspired looking at those cheeks.  Just another attempt to pretend I'm Pam, that's all this is....

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 11:07 am Title: Chapter 1

It's uncanny how you can make something so stupidly simple just so...AWESOME.
Seriously. You rock. So hard. (twss!)
Thank you so much.
cheers.
--Lex

Author's Response: Amalia - thanks for the AWESOME review.  You sure know how to boost my ego!   And really, Jim's just a beautiful collection of simple things, isn't he??

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1

The cheekometer... a very clever idea.... hum, i totally want to use this idea as a way to get federal grant money. when asked how did i think of this amazing new study i will say all because of a tv show and its lovely fans who post silly lil fics such as this.

cept i won't. well, if i actualyl did apply, and got accepted i would. but, i think my grant should read something more about what i am actually studying and researching than this.

 

wow, yeah, that was just...

 

simply good story. ignore all the other stuff 



Author's Response:

LOL - you are too funny!  How I wish I could find a way to get a grant to study Jim Halpert for real!  (Of course, I guess it would help if he WAS real....what am I saying? Of course he's real.  He is.  He IS.)

Anyway, I'd love to take credit for the cheek-o-meter, but I believe colette invented it over on the TWoP forum for JK.  It was, however, used with permission! :-) 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1

cheek-o-meter I love it.  I want those cheeks back too. I was watching season 2 and he had so much cheekiness to him.

Author's Response: You can thank colette for the cheek-o-meter.  And I feel good that those cheeks will continue to make a comeback!!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1

YAY!!! That was awesome Moxie! Thank you, thank you, for such a wonderful cheek fic! And I said before that I liked S3 cheeks better than S2 or S1... well, I take it back. Thanks to you, I'm lovin' those pinchable full cheeks! 

Author's Response: Well, then my work here is done!  I'm glad I've helped you to see the light!!  :-)

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1

On my personal Cuteness Meter (tm), which measures the cuteness of a story on a range of 1 to 10, this registers an 11. :D

And as an extra added bonus, there's also great lines like this one:

He felt like black and white compared to her color wheel.

Loved all of this. Thank you for sharing it.



Author's Response: thanks - I've never gotten an 11 before!! :-)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 09:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay! Smiley, happy Jim and Pam! Woo!

 Too much good stuff to quote, but just know that I'm grinning, now, too. Thanks for that!



Author's Response: Hurray - so glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Love, love, love it!

Fave part: His once more soft and rounded cheek. Her Jim.

Awww. and the cheek-o-meter. Ingenious. We're such hussies.

Author's Response: So glad you liked it!  And remember, colette is the owner of the cheek-o-meter; I just borrowed it!

Reviewer: Shroom Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 09:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww, Jim cheeks!  *love*

This was so sweet!  Great concept and title -- I love the idea of his cheeks being a tangible measure of his happiness.  I can definitely believe Pam would miss his cheek-y smile.  And of course his mom would notice and get all motherly over the loss of his kissable cheeks.

I really liked the idea that they staggered their breaks and trips to the vending machine, so they would have more opportunities to spend time together.

The cheek-o-meter banter was adorable!  And it's so believable that they would finally admit their feelings under the guise of a cute, teasing conversation like that.  Yay for cheek fic!



Author's Response: thanks so much, shroom!!  I'll make sure I don't let the hussies down when I next take on those forearms! 

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Utterly adorable, moxie! And I say that as both a reader and a board certified Cheekologist. Love his mom lamenting his former kissable cheeks (too cute.) You did the profession proud.


Author's Response: I feel proud to say that I'm now a fully-accredited cheekologist in-training.  Won't be long now until I can get to pass those boards.  Somehow I doubt I'll mind studying for that!!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 08:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Hee, This is so cute! What a great idea for a story!

Author's Response: thank you!  Wait until I can get to my next body part:  the forearms!!!  :-9

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Man, those hussies are just insatiable. At least when you climb the JK/JH tree, you get the prize of those cheeks at the top! This is, as always, very sweet, and a bit cheeky (DOH!). I am still a bit disappointed you didn't go with any of these titles but I'm still incredibly honored to have you use one of my suggestions!

"Pam Beesly and the Great Cheek-o-Meter Experiment" or "Close Encounters of a Cheeky Kind".....

Her Jim, indeed. Thanks for this on a morning when the cold and wind gives everybody rosy, pinchable cheeks.



Author's Response: heh - not enough people in this world have Jim Halpert cheeks.  And all your titles were awesome!! 

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