Date: February 20, 2007 10:47 am Title: Epilogue
If only, if only. I love to live in fanfic land where everything turns out wonderful.
Date: February 20, 2007 08:33 am Title: A Very Confusing Day
IMHO - you cannot go wrong with the fluffy epilogue. :)
Excellent job on your first fic!!! And no need to thank me - it was absolutely my pleasure!
Date: February 19, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Epilogue
“It’s the old Jim,” she wanted to scream to the office, “he’s back.”
I can't WAIT until all the jammers can scream this out loud at their TVs too. Seriously. It'll be one heck of a night ;) Lovely story!
Date: February 19, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Epilogue
That wasreally lovely, but what really struck me was the last chapter. You hit it on the head fo me. I have been so unhappy this season with Jim and Pam and I just realized what the problem is. They weren't together last year but it didn't bother me as much. But JIM changed! That's what it is! I need old Jim back, damnit. So, thanks for the revelation, seriously!
Date: February 19, 2007 03:49 pm Title: Epilogue
The sleeves! He rolled up the sleeves! Hooray!
Date: February 19, 2007 03:34 pm Title: Epilogue
ah, happy epilogue. loved the its the same but its different but its the sameness of it.
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2007 07:37 pm Title: An Overdue Conversation
That was such a great chapter. I like how they didn't just jump right into talking about the big issues. I also think you wrote their flirty scened really well. PLEASE write a follow up :)
Date: February 14, 2007 06:14 am Title: An Overdue Conversation
damn, these two people really like hurting each other. i mean, seriously. it is like, constant just hurt. they need to get everythin out in the open in real (aka tv life) faster!
a nice chapter for valentine's day. now going to force myself to work!
Date: February 13, 2007 09:15 pm Title: An Overdue Conversation
i would definately like! i love this story!
9 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2007 07:59 pm Title: An Overdue Conversation
Yeah..just the romance I needed before I head to bed. Thanks!
Date: February 10, 2007 01:04 pm Title: The Phone Call
what? you let real life get in the way of living in a fictional world. how dare you. if i wasn't so intent upon living in the fictional world, i wouldn't even read this. but i rather enjoy ignoring real life, so, read i shall
grrr... i loved the chapter, but then it just ended. stop having a real life. the next chapter needs to be posted ASAP!
Author's Response:
ask you shall receive - hope you like it.
9 [Report This]Date: February 10, 2007 12:46 pm Title: The Phone Call
Great chapter! You are just evil with cliffhangers! Please don't make me wait to long to hear what happens at Pam's apartment :)
Date: February 10, 2007 12:04 pm Title: The Phone Call
Squeeeee! Yes! This part:
She was terrified to do this tonight, but couldn’t endure another day like today.
I feel like this exact thing is keeping both of them in limbo on the show. One of them just needs to go for it. So props for making them do this in your fic.
Date: February 09, 2007 05:45 pm Title: A Very Confusing Day
Umm. Isn't there more? ;) Don't leave us hanging too long!
9 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2007 08:00 am Title: Miles Apart
I love this chapter. They are both just so clueless about how the other really feels, and you captured it beautifully! Such a good cliffhanger, please write the conversation soon, or it'll drive me crazy!
Date: February 09, 2007 05:42 am Title: Miles Apart
grrr, i need more!!!! i wanna know what happens now!
Date: February 09, 2007 04:42 am Title: Miles Apart
this is really good! i'm looking forward to the rest of it.
i would suggest putting breaks between the p.o.v. shifts, but that's the only thing that caught my eye!
good job ;)
Date: February 07, 2007 02:49 pm Title: A Very Confusing Day
Awesome chapter! Loved this part - "He thought to himself that he should just stay out of the break room altogether – weird things seem to happen in this room. And the parking lot. And the conference room. And his desk. Maybe he should just get a new job altogether. Perhaps he could find a job where there were no women." Can't wait to read the next chapter. Congrats on your first fic!
Date: February 07, 2007 02:18 pm Title: A Very Confusing Day
YAY uncgirl! Congrats on your first fic! Keep going!
Date: February 07, 2007 01:35 pm Title: A Very Confusing Day
Love your style. Can't wait for the next installment!
Date: February 07, 2007 06:11 am Title: A Very Confusing Day
You have to continue this so we can see what Jim does. Hopefully he will go to Pam
Date: February 07, 2007 05:25 am Title: A Very Confusing Day
haha, foot on his steak. great way to remember that lil detail, which was hilarious.
anyways, that was good :)
Date: February 06, 2007 10:03 pm Title: A Very Confusing Day
Great Start! I love the way you've portrayed Jim's and Pam's characters and inner reflections. After this week's episode though, I'm not thinking it's likely that Karen is going to relinquish her grip on Jim that easily.... Please continue--I'm exicted to see where things go from here!