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Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2011 09:21 am Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

Such a sweet, romantic story with an awesome bloody twist. I loved it.

PS I also just read "Talking Head", and when I realized the body part, my first reactions was, "What a clever title!" :)

Reviewer: Desslok Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2008 10:08 am Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

So sweet! Another wonderful story! I love the way you write and can't wait to read the rest of your stuff!

Reviewer: foreverdreaming Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2008 02:36 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

cute story!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 09:52 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

So cute -)

Reviewer: fashion_show_at_lunch Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 10:58 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

awwwww. *blush*

Reviewer: Jewelsy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2008 02:44 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

OMG This story was so cute and full of lovely Jammy goodness. Thanks for writting it.

Reviewer: Strider Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2008 10:49 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

Very nice! I thought Michael was great, too!

--Strider

Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2007 11:28 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

Awwwwww!

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2007 12:09 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

Awww...how adorable and sweet!

Reviewer: Shroom Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2007 11:11 am Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

Aww, Moxie, I loved this one as much as the cheek fic!  You should objectify Jim more often.  ;-)

The whole thing was sweet & adorable & funny.  Even the disclaimer was awesome -- No forearms were actually injured in the writing of this fanfic.  (Which was even funnier on the reread, when I knew what happens.)

And oh, you used one of my very favorite "intimate" actions - when he rested his forehead against hers.  I LOVED that!  I swear, I'm such a sucker for forehead leaning - it just always strikes me as very intimate & comforting.

And I adored Jim's line, “Give me your hand then,” he said softly. “I want to be sure I have a hold on you.”  That was so perfect - sweet & simple & swoon-worthy, and I could really imagine Jim on pain meds saying that.

I adored the rest of it, too.  The classic romcom plot of pretending to be his wife, and of course the forearm discussion, and the gentle kiss of acceptance, and Jim agreeing to wear his sleeves up to make her happy.  Fantastic!



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the kind words!!  I only hope i can do just  to his lips.  They are quite nice, aren't they??

and yeah, I'm a big sucker for forehead leaning.  :-) 

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 09:49 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

forearms...::sigh:: i loved this. So deliciously cute!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2007 03:31 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

Cute fic and I love the forearm reference

Reviewer: Calli Wall Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2007 07:37 am Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

I LOVE this story. Seriously, fantastic.

Author's Response: oh, thanks so much!  I appreciate your ego-boosting comments!  :-)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2007 06:05 am Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

Oh, Moxie. How perfect that it would be relatively quiet and matter-of-fact (despite the medical emergency). Let them be done with the drama and just be happy. *sigh* So sweet.

Author's Response: Yeah, I have to say the more I think about "them", the more likely it's going to be her saying "I love you," and him saying "oh, okay. good."  and things just go from there.... :-)

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 11:00 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

Aw, man. So good. I'm seriously starting to develop a Jim At The Hospital fetish. Cute and romantic.

Author's Response: Thanks - I think it has to do with the fact that looking after Jim would be so much fun!  ;-)

Reviewer: Beth Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

thank you for writting such cute fluff, i needed it after last night's episode.  so cute, great job

Author's Response: I hear you. We need all the fluff we can get these days!!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

Now Moxie...I must confess that I'm utterly baffled as to what the fuss is all about.  Forearms?  Seriously?  Hm. I'm stumped.

Bwah!  Okay, as premiere forearm whore (I wear the title proudly), this was just a delight to read!  So much fun that she masqueraded as his wife, then came clean about why she prefers the sleeves rolled up...laughed out loud at his comment about the pain meds making him dream up the conversation.

So...*cough/pushy* what's the next, er, body part on the list?  Because I know you'll do it justice - and then some.  (TWSS!)



Author's Response: Oh, I'm definitely thinking lips......  :-)

Reviewer: Marcine Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 03:50 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

SO cute! As Kelly would say. :)



Author's Response:

and I think Kelly would appreciate a good forearm, too!  :-)

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 03:12 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

I love the body part series! I don't know what I'd do without your happy stories! They always put a smile on my face.

Author's Response: thanks so much!  I do try to keep us fellow Jam fans happy!

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 02:09 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

My love for your stories knows no bounds. I'm tempted to create my own shrine to Jim's forearms now, but my roommate might be concerned.

Author's Response: haha!  Keep it in the back of your closet, and she'll never see it!!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 02:03 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

Yay!  Pam is the number one hussy!  And you can bet Jim's sweet ass that she has noticed those sleeves! 

And I never tire of the "While You Were Sleeping" lie to the hospital about being the wife/fiancée.  Totally classic and romantic.  Yay again!



Author's Response:

hehh - yeah, can you tell I loved WYWS??  I have that movie on video I've had so long!  Next body part: lips!

 

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 01:56 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

So. Cute.
Really, I don't even know what to do with myself, this is so adorable.

And I hadn't even noticed the detail of his shirt sleeves. I was wondering what I was missing about Jim.
Yes, I have forearm fetish too (no joke).
Pam Halpert!!! HEE!
Thanks so much for this.
cheers.
--Lex

Author's Response: OMG - you didn't notice??  There's going to be a squee heard around the world the first episode he's showing those forearms again!! ;-)

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

Moxie, you dare go where only hussies tread. Who knew bodily damage could be so romantic? Though you had me a little worried when blood started spurting from his forearm...how sweet that even then, he wants Pam to know he doesn't blame her? Okay, what 'part' comes next? I expect a very comprehensive list to be covered, missy.

Author's Response: Well, deep down, Jim's all about protecting Pam.  That's why I liked writing her looking after him.  :-)  As for the next installment, we are definitely going with lips.  I expect I'll need to rate that one a little higher than a T, though!

Reviewer: sharky Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 01:16 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

Squee! That was sooo good and cute...and bloody. But in a cute way.


Author's Response:

thanks!  Is it wierd that the thougth of Pam splattered with Jim's blood is romantic??  Okay, I watch way too much medical dramas....

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: eyegypt Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 01:11 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?

You must cover more body parts ;-)

Author's Response: I am contempting the next in the series:  hair or eyes?

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