1 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2019 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 2 Stepping Forward
To be continued? I wish. This does remind me of a romance novel, so you're doing well there. Thanks for sharing.
Date: December 24, 2010 07:28 am Title: Chapter 2 Stepping Forward
"TO BE CONTINUED..."
Really?
Date: February 19, 2008 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow I just rediscovered this story and I forgot how much I adore it!! Are you going to update again?
Date: December 04, 2007 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh man I love this story so much! Are you going to update it again? Please please please, it's one of my absolute favorites! I love seductive Pam, haha
Date: June 24, 2007 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 2 Stepping Forward
wow..that was really HOT haha
update soon!!!
Date: March 31, 2007 07:14 am Title: Chapter 2 Stepping Forward
VL, I'm going to have Dwight Shrute come after you for slacking off on the job since you've not written another chapter of this. In case you forgot how ch2 ended "Pam exhaled slowly, putting her clothes back in order. This was going to be fun." NEXT CHAPTER, ASAP, or this will be reflected in your next performance review!!! --CH
10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2007 12:34 am Title: Chapter 2 Stepping Forward
@#$%@$^&!
What a cliffhanger! Man!!
I really enjoy your writing, and this is a fantastic example of it. Everything flows extremely well. Nothing seems too far out of the actual Dunder Mifflin universe.
"She leaned in and whispered in his ear, 'In case you couldn't tell, I was flirting with you. Now try and tell her how this kiss doesn't matter.'
That was my favorite line thus far. Really fantastic. Pam needs to do this. This is the definition of Fancy New Beesly!
Date: March 17, 2007 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 2 Stepping Forward
Why didn't you keep writing? You just ended it with that?
Date: March 14, 2007 06:37 am Title: Chapter 2 Stepping Forward
Wow..just Wow...I am lovin' "take control" Pam :) So good !!
Date: March 13, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sorry, Vaughn, had to come back for one more little note. I LOVE the way you end this chater. It's just such a powerful moment that I hope Pam might someday get on the show. Thanks for delightfully blurring the line between "Office reality" and fanfic!
Date: March 13, 2007 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 2 Stepping Forward
Vaughnlove, I'm enjoying this and your take on Fancy New Beesly. I can't wait to see where this goes next and I think a doorstep moment would be in order. Jim should go find Pam, especially if you've finally given her the guts she needs to, as you said, step up!
And, erm, Vaughn, I wrote "Inconvenient Truth." :)
Can't wait for more of this. Keep up the great work!
C.
Date: March 13, 2007 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 2 Stepping Forward
Just to let you know, Becky215 wrote An Inconvenient Truth, not Greenfish.
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2007 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 2 Stepping Forward
OH hell yeah!!! I think I like this Pam..I'm happy she didn't get all depressed and sad when Jim ran out of there.. Keep it up...Keep it quick..janet
Author's Response: I know, right? It'll get even better, I promise.
Date: March 13, 2007 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice!
This kind of Pam needs to make more appearances!! Man oh man. I definitely like this Pam. Yikes. Awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Jamster! I love agressive Pam!
8 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2007 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this! What a great "gotcha" moment - "Now try and tell her how this kiss doesn't matter." Can't wait to see what's next!
Date: February 22, 2007 09:10 am Title: Chapter 1
oooh, that was such a great tease! I can't wait to see how Jim explains that... Can't wait to read more!
Date: February 22, 2007 06:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice start. Will there be more? Please?
Date: February 21, 2007 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooooh, Karen is going to be SO PISSED! I can't wait to see where you go with this next! Thanks for writing and please update soon! :)
Date: February 21, 2007 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, SNAP. I am so dying for our girl to BRING IT.....
Date: February 21, 2007 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
YES! Pam should totally just tackle him on his desk. New one or the old one -- she can have him either way. And we know that Drunk!Pam can be very kissy, so yay for that!
Date: February 21, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was a great start!!! Damn, I wish she really did that!!
One thing though, I'd like it if you could double space between chapters. It just makes it easier to read!! thanks
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know, and sorry it took so long to write back. I hope it looks better and it's easier to read now.
Date: February 21, 2007 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah~ I love InControl!Pam. She really should just do this. It'd make life so much easier.