Reviews For The Little Things
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Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2007 03:19 pm Title: The Little Things

You killed a crab though.  I cannot condone this.  Unless there's garlic butter.



Author's Response: Oh, come on, of COURSE there's garlic butter. It was actually under Jim's bed too, I just didn't get that far in the story. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 08:07 pm Title: The Little Things

WOW!!! so random, and yet, sooo possible! i agree, those were some fun prompts!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, StarShine, and I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: the_chosen_one00 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 02:08 am Title: The Little Things

Hahaha, that has to be one of my favorite Future!fics. Truly genious. You deserve a pulitzer

Author's Response: Hah!! Excellent, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I will gladly accept your compliments. ;)

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 10:47 pm Title: The Little Things

OMG, that poem CRACKED ME UP!!! Oh this was so funny!

Author's Response: Oh, wow, thanks LoveFool! That's awesome that you liked it and got a laugh from it! :)

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 09:19 pm Title: The Little Things

Adorable! I must have laughed out loud ten different times. Your dialogue is fanastic!


Author's Response: Hooray, thanks shan! It's good to hear that the dialogue works, and I'm glad you liked the story! This was a really fun challenge!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 04:55 pm Title: The Little Things

So cute! Fluffy and sweet- and a seamless use of the elements. Congratulations!

Author's Response: Oh my, thanks for the sweet compliments, lis! I'm happy you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 03:21 pm Title: The Little Things

aww...that was fun!!  Great job - when I first saw those 5 I thought "how in the world.....?"

But you did it!!!!  :-)



Author's Response:

Hee, thanks mox! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 12:55 pm Title: The Little Things

This was cute!  You fit the 5 elements in so well that when I got to the end and saw what they were, I went back and re-read it. Nothing seemed "forced" or like something was just "put" in there.  Great job!

Author's Response: Ooh, thanks so much, kaystar! I was worried about it seeming disjointed, so I'm happy you felt like it worked!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 12:21 pm Title: The Little Things

Haha, that is a cute story.I had a hermit crab... it died in its aquarium type thing though.


Author's Response: I had one too, and it died in its aquarium after my brother left the light on and basically fried it. It was pretty sick. Glad you liked the story!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 10:55 am Title: The Little Things

Hee, so cute! Awesome job with the 5 elements! The crab funeral reminded me of "Garden State" when Andrew and Sam gave the hampster funeral.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it, and thanks for the fun prompts! :)

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