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Reviewer: jollyholly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

loved it!

Reviewer: nandance Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1

WOW! This story is so perfect! I adore the ending paragraph.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is so nice! You have some really lovely descriptions. I particularly like: He silently begs everything in the world to keep still so that he can keep this moment, this one moment where they’re so close he can feel her pulse under his thumb when he moves his fingers down to her neck. *sigh* Oh, Jim.

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 10:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww! Cute, sweet & happy. Really fun to read!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1

This was sweet. My favorite part was that Pam wasn't wearing the ring anymore.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 08:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay for the stranger's cabin in the woods! Cute story.

Reviewer: lano Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 03:15 am Title: Chapter 1

"He feels kind of like he’s in some trashy romance novel but realizes that if that were the case she would have stayed." - love that.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 01:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Really liked this line: "He silently begs everything in the world to keep still so that he can keep this moment,..."

Reviewer: aurorabora Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 01:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Wet AND drunk Jim! Who could ask for more? ;) Loved it.

Author's Response: I know I couldn't. Thanks!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 01:32 am Title: Chapter 1

And he can’t help but think how different it is to kiss her now, how kissing her before was a lot like jumping in the river. He had to throw himself all in and when he came back up she would have a frightened look on her face and they would immediately regret it.

Nice! I can completely see that skittery Pam.

Author's Response: And who wouldn't be skittery after a kiss from Jim : ) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Pixel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 01:30 am Title: Chapter 1

I loved this. Very sweet.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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