Date: April 09, 2007 12:52 pm Title: because of reasons
Your use of italics manages to make everything sound exactly like they're really saying it.
She doesn’t want to say you’re welcome, because he isn’t and that’s not why she’s taking it down.
Oh man, yes. Very well done.
Date: March 01, 2007 10:12 am Title: because of reasons
Oh jeeze! I was giggling through this entire thing! I was so excited to see the reference to Creed stealing Kevin's DVD. Awesome way to incorporate the scratched DVD prompt!
That deleted scene from Cocktails really made me think that Angela and Oscar could have an actual friendship, and you showed perfectly how it could work. I love Angela's inner thoughts, I love that Kevin wound up with water on the front of his jacket, and I LOVE this line:
"She spent the day in a state of constant fear."
Date: March 01, 2007 09:58 am Title: because of reasons
Wow. I cannot even...where do I start? Competing over when they filed their taxes, and "Do not bring American Pie 2 into this,” and the poster and everything else. I love it, there were so many moments that screamed Oscar and Angela - you got them exactly right.