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Reviewer: Bailey08 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 06:38 pm Title: while your mobile dances above

Very well done!  Love it.  When is your next one?  LOL. 

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 04:05 pm Title: while your mobile dances above

Hee! This was so cute. I could absolutely believe that as much as Ryan seems to want to be rid of Kelly, he'd miss her if he actually got his wish.

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 02:01 pm Title: while your mobile dances above

I am in love with Ryan/Kelly fic where he has to grovel for being an idiot.  This one is no exception - very funny, and I love the visual of Ryan slurping a blue slushy while ineptly stalking...OH! and that Kelly's talking makes the whole thing easier - just wonderful.

Reviewer: Emma Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 12:34 pm Title: while your mobile dances above

Great job! Very sweet.

Reviewer: janelle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 08:30 am Title: while your mobile dances above

god, i love them :) good job, your ryan is perfectly adorable!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 08:25 am Title: while your mobile dances above

I enjoyed this.  Let's see...: Ryan's a bad stalker (can't he do anything right?); Kelly recognizes Ryan's sneeze; you slipped in that Jim broke up with Karen AND that Karen and Ryan made out.  Yeah, those are my favorite parts.

But, I heard that Ryan and Karen made out AND had sex (/Kevin).  (Why can't I hear the phrase "made out" without thinking "AND had sex"?  I am channelling Kevin.)  

Thanks for this. 

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2007 10:51 pm Title: while your mobile dances above

YAY!!! Ryan/Kelly! Seriously great job with your five, sure didn't pick them out! And in just over an hour? Crazy good! Oh, and of course bonus points for throwing in the little Karim breakup fact! ^_^

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2007 10:42 pm Title: while your mobile dances above

Jee-sus.  An hour-an-a-quarter?  That's some talent.  Good stuff

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