Date: July 21, 2006 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh, love the intense jim whisper at the end.
6 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2006 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
“I did not misinterpret anything”
Hell no he didn't.
Good job in capturing Pam's inner monologue.
Author's Response: Thanks shannanagin! :)
8 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2006 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm with nqllisi in quoting that line. Sigh, that's EXACTLY what he should have said to her.
7 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2006 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Said it before, saying it again. Jim's whisper is f***ing intense!! Gah! Chills.
Author's Response: Thanks again, nomadshan :)
8 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2006 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved your story. Poor Jim.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
9 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2006 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
“I did not misinterpret anything” he whispers. He stands back, and looks at me again, like it might be the last time he does, and turns to walk out of the office.
Oh, this gave me chills. Wow. I can totally see this happening and now I'm terrified that it will! Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks nqllisi! :)