Date: May 29, 2007 06:24 am Title: Welcome Home, Jim
Great story, excellent writing. More please...
Date: May 02, 2007 09:31 am Title: I Remember
I just found this story and am absolutely loving it. It's adorably awkward. I can really see them acting like this in this situation. For your first fanfic ever, this is amazing! And kudos to your little sister. You two make a good team. I hope you'll write many more stories.
Date: May 01, 2007 09:18 pm Title: I Remember
I can't believe I haven't been reading this story! I love it, totally love it! I think that you have captured Pam's awkwardness so well, and how cute that they have the same taste! I hope we get more soon.
Author's Response: lol thanks for reading - im glad you are reading!!!! i will try to update soon!!!
Date: May 01, 2007 07:55 pm Title: I Remember
aw that chapter was such a tease! ;)
"I remember." ah yes! although i wouldn't have been able to resist touching his hair...
Author's Response: me too!!! i wanted her to touch it but then i thought the memory would be better! but dont worry there will be hair touching soon enough!!! thanks for reading!
Date: May 01, 2007 07:30 pm Title: I Remember
Aww, they have identical color schemes!! It's been so long since I've seen this story, now I don't remember if he's still with Karen. I'd better go check!
I love that they'll need to spend all this time together!
Author's Response:
hes still sort of with karen - but its not too too serious.
10 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 04:09 pm Title: Welcome Home, Jim
I've really enjoyed this. Is there going to be more Maryuc?
Author's Response: Yes - actually i was just working on an update. Thanks so much for reading!!!!!
Date: April 01, 2007 10:33 am Title: Phone Call
Yay!!!!! My grief bone is dwindling, almost non-existent, in this chapter. See, isn't this nice? I don't have to yell at you, we can be happy? This is a happy place. Happy thoughts.
Of course, Jim is an amateur with colors. Pam should really see his apartment on Sunday and then they should go paint shopping. That is totally what should happen.
Author's Response: Wow - did you sneak into my room and look at my outline for the next chapter, or what??? Thanks for reading!
Date: April 01, 2007 06:01 am Title: Phone Call
she is going to paint! oooh, i can't wait for more!i am so glad he mentioned it was his mom, cause that way pam knows!
Date: March 22, 2007 06:49 am Title: A Lack of Color
gah! these two! first off jim in jeans - amazing. because i totally love jim in jeans. but i dislike the rest because these two are just horrible! they just need to get happy!
Date: March 20, 2007 10:53 pm Title: A Lack of Color
Note to any guy: If it's Mom on the phone, say "Hi, Mom", so the love of your life doesn't think it's your skanky, psychotic girlfriend.
Aargh! Maryuc, what about my grief bone? You are totally ignoring my grief bone. I am just going to have to keep reading this and yelling about my grief bone. This is all your doing.
Date: March 20, 2007 09:34 am Title: Coffee
No! Jim should not answer the phone unless he can say, "It's my Mom" or "Hey, Mark!" For Karen (if it was her), flip the phone shut. She'll call back. (Like a bad penny, Karen will always show up.)
Maryuc, please watch out for my grief bone in future chapters. We need some hope to offset all the misunderstanding and angst on the real show!! (Well, I do anyway.)
Nice writing, though.
Author's Response: A bad penny? I've never heard of that! But I do agree Karen needs to be vaporized.
Date: March 20, 2007 06:34 am Title: Welcome Home, Jim
I am going on hiatus from this story until you start posting more at one time, there's tantalizing and then there is cruel!!!! just kidding, I'll keep reading but come on cut us (and them) some slack!
Date: March 20, 2007 01:27 am Title: Coffee
Well, that was 30 kinds of awkward, lol. You had me squirming and shifting.
Stupid Jim, don't you know not to answer a phone call during an important lunch. Better have been your mother.
Date: March 20, 2007 01:08 am Title: Welcome Home, Jim
Really really good, please keep writing.
Date: March 19, 2007 08:40 am Title: The Letter
AS;LKJHSD;LRKJ;S;K;JHSDF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She wrote to him!!!
Although, a P.S.? Seriously?
That's so Pam, though.
Thanks!!
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response: I know - i didn't know if i shoudl put that in or not but in the end wanted the note to actually say somethign without begin glike a long love letter or somethign dorky like that. Thanks for reading!!!
Date: March 19, 2007 07:43 am Title: The Letter
Oh, my heart hurts for poor Pam! This is a great story!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! My heart hurts for Pam too! Dumb Jim!!!
Date: March 19, 2007 03:08 am Title: The Letter
*sigh* these two crazy kids.
I loved the invitation... loved it. What're you going to do now, Jim? Hmmm?
Love this. Waiting for an update.
Author's Response: THanks for reviewing! I think i know where the rest of the story is going - so the updates should be more frequent now.
Date: March 19, 2007 02:52 am Title: Dinner
I don't like Karen. I was going to say "hate" but that's such a strong word. But I really don't like her.
That being said, I wanted to say that I admire you for posting your first fic. That in itself takes a lot of courage. But you definitely couldn't tell this was your first fic, you write really well!
Okay, I had to get that out there, now - I must read the rest of the story! LOL
Date: March 18, 2007 09:41 pm Title: The Letter
maryuc, you are making me smile with the sweetness while you're kicking me in the grief bone since Jim didn't get the card before!!
However, I can imagine some happy possibilities in this kind of scenario, so you're forgiven for the whole grief bone thing.
Continuing? I hope so.
Author's Response: Oh no! Not in the grief bone! LOL! I will definitely continue - updates should be more frequent now ...thanks for reviewing!
Date: March 10, 2007 07:00 pm Title: Sack Lunch
This is really good. I can't wait to read about their meeting - and what the letter said.
Author's Response: THanks for reviewing! Was the meeting what you were expecting?
Date: March 09, 2007 01:40 pm Title: Welcome Home, Jim
I love this so far- to me, you've really caught the characters as they are in the show, and the dialog & thoughts seem realistic and not forced. Please keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was really scared they wouldn't sound like Jim and Pam - thanks for writin gthat!
Date: March 09, 2007 06:39 am Title: Sack Lunch
poor pam. i just watched the merger when it was repeated last night. it was so sad :(. i want more, i want to know what happens at coffee meeting!
Author's Response: I know - the Merger is so depressing. It nearly made me cry! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: March 08, 2007 09:42 pm Title: Dinner
Oh!!!! What's in the envelope?
Author's Response: Is it what you were expecting???
Date: March 08, 2007 08:43 pm Title: Dinner
Postmarked June 10th. I'm curious now...
Date: March 07, 2007 10:09 pm Title: Welcome Home, Jim
Oooh. If you REALLY REALLY want to know about the future episodes, you have to go to the spoiler threads on TWOP. There's spoilers only, spoilers and speculation, and Jam spoilers and spec.
And I feel slightly better about now, because we've seen some good and some bad, and I think (/hope) they will get together eventually. I think (/hope/have some reason to believe based on spoilers) that the Karen thing has an expiration date.
Have you seen the deleted scenes for Business School (NBC.com)? If not, go look. There's a JEALOUS!Karen moment.