Date: March 25, 2007 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
yay i just finshed my stat homework, so this is my reward (and then i shall email you... i almost replied at 4 am this morning, but i decided that wasn't a smart idea). and ooh, more scarlet letter soon also.makes me happy.
but back to the story at hand...
haha, i love reading your karen now that i know more of your thoughts. but, we all know that jam is much better than jaren. even though jaren may make more sense. we all love jam.
hehe, i laughed at pam's message to jim. no crrepy guy=much better time.
oh comon karen. stop being jealous. i will say it is a tad bit rude of jim though to ignore her to reply to pam. but, still, very jim, cause jim would be awesome like that. yes, i called jim rude and awesome in the same thought.
there is a paris, tennesse, and it has a mini eiffel tower in it. it is like, just over the tree line tall. and i was so there, and so, i think of that, and it isn't as impressive as the real eiffel i am sure.
damn, i really wanted jim to be there for real. :(. i had no idea how he would have gotten there so fast (jim can time travel? has other superpowers?)
it is all so damn realistic that i want to throw things at my computer. because jim is conflicted. and oh, so much more. but, yeah.
Author's Response: Thanks for your lengthy reply!!!! Ha...I loved all your thoughts...oh, and I might use that little bit about the mini Eiffel Tower in Tennesee...so, if you could get me some more info about it, that would rock. How cute would it be to mention that in this story???
Date: March 24, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
The first chapter was kind of soul crushing but the 2nd and 3rd chapters are slowly lifting my spirits. Please keep going with this marvelous story. Also, I was just in Paris last summer and it is so true about there being couples everywhere. We actually started a tally of all the couples we could see making out in public. I think we may have reached the high teens in less than a week. Great detail.
Date: March 17, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love this story. I enjoy that this time Pam left and the idea of her exploring Paris is great! The text messages were totally believable and very romantic, even if they are still just talking friendship.
Re: replies, I personally do like replies, but that's just me, i like getting to know people. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I know I'm way late in getting to all this reply stuff, but I just wanted to say that I appreciate your review and reading. I noticed that you're one to always comment on my stuff and it makes me happy to have someone so consistant. Thanks!
Date: March 17, 2007 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
who knew that text messages could make my heart do flipy flops.
this is so great, with pam being alone, and realizing she wants her friend and everything.
and personally, i love replies to reviews because they make me feel all special, and yeah. i am just that pathetic, that that is all it takes to make me feel special.
Emily, my faithful reviewer and reader....first off, I appreciate you so much. You have no idea. Whenever I post something, I always wait to see you review! So...thanks for all the time you've spent commenting and reading. It means alot to me...so, here is my reply you. Thanks for all that you do. Writing, reading, and inspiring! Heres to more JAM moments! :)
Date: March 17, 2007 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really like this story! It's so nice to see Pam in Paris, alone. I would love it if you kept going! (Oh, and I would only expect a reply if you have something that you want/need to say. Otherwise, just soak up the praise!)
Date: March 17, 2007 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw, cute! But is this going to end in her surprising her at the Eiffel tower? I don't know if I can handle that. Although I'm pretty sure it's hard to have a romantic moment there with all of the tourists and crowds... ;)
Date: March 10, 2007 11:50 am Title: Chapter 1
is three of four supposed to be three or four (from michaels talking head at the beginning) or am i just confused?
But OMG, I loved it. Seriously. It was so wonderfully sad. I felt so proud of Pam in a way, taking off and exploring the world. I kinda guess cause I was jealous of that. I want to explore everything. But its still sad - because, its not happy. But its just, oh, I suck with words.
Please post more.
Date: March 09, 2007 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was damned good. Just Wow. I don't think I've ever seen this done before (for such a simple concept, that's odd, but I guess people don't want to think about that possibility). But you took it, and you nailed it. I'm not sure if I want to see where you take it, though, because you said it perfectly already.