Reviews For The Round Robin
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Reviewer: lesslikeyou Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2007 09:53 am Title: Moxie's chapter

Wait... WHAT.

Reviewer: BaraJam Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 05:51 am Title: Moxie's chapter

OMG!!! SOMEONE PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE PICK THIS UP. Tell me thats not where it ends!

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 12:36 am Title: Moxie's chapter

Crap. Oh goodness. crap. oh goodness. I snorted. 

I can't be any more intelligible than that without pulling a Kelly. 

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2007 10:59 am Title: Moxie's chapter

Hee...This is too good.  Can't wait for the next installment.  Wonder if Jim suspects anything?  He's behaving a little weird.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 06:59 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

I love this Round Robbin idea! You three have really made it flow well, and I can't wait to read the fourth part.

Reviewer: dudski Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 10:37 pm Title: sharky's chapter

I KNEW IT! Well, not really. But I definitely thought "maybe she's a dude!" in passing while I was reading the first two chapters.

HOW do you manage to suck me in with Jim/Pam and "if you don't know..." and then KILL ME with ManKaren in the same chapter? HEE.

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 10:37 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

Are you guys just working out Karen issues here or what...hilarious!  This is a cruel, cruel way to leave things! I can't wait to see what Karen's name used to be ;)

Reviewer: tizzy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 09:47 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

ok wow, i love this concept, and speacial note to moxie, now not only do i love your Karen but i love Karen's secret... wow just wow that was... /Pam

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 08:23 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

Oh. My. God.

 ::::picking up jaw from floor::::  Where oh where will this go.  Awesome secret!

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 04:01 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

Bwahahaha! OMG, you made me laugh out loud! I can't WAIT to see the next chapter...

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 03:53 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

Wow now that was an ending I didnt expect.

Reviewer: ilovepocky Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 03:46 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

..

 

:O.

 

The plot twist has temporarily left me unable to make a coherent comment. 

 

Gahh. :OO. XDD.  

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 03:29 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

WHOA, did not see that coming, thats so friggin hilarious. I can't believe it. I am glad you were evil and dangled it out even longer! HAHA, that is just making me laugh!

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

Oh My God!  Wow!  I did not see that coming, but I like it.  Oh, and am I the only one that was just as annoyed as Pam when Karen called Jim "Honey"?

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 02:23 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

AHAHAHAHA!!!!! Oh no you DI'Int!!! I was SO not expecting that. Here I was thinking that you were all going to torture each other by leaving the secret to the next writer in the next chapter and thus torture your readers as well, but no, you went right for it! I am so entertained right now.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 02:09 pm Title: sharky's chapter

HAHAHAHA!

Jim having a crush on Pam??  Not really a secret.

Karen having her dangly bits removed?  Now THAT'S a SECRET!

Loving this girls!  Can't wait to see what Sophia has in store!!!



Author's Response: This is NOT a comment directed at me, but I had to say that you win for using the term "dangly bits."  Ah HAHAHAHA.  - GF

Reviewer: the_chosen_one00 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 02:09 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

OH WOW. That was---unexpected!!! I'm in love with you. I'm sorry if that's wierd for you to hear, but I needed you to hear it. Because that was....amazing doesn't cover it.

Reviewer: sharky Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 02:05 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

Oh. My. God. What monster did I unleash.

Reviewer: starblossom56 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 01:51 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

:O!!!!!

I was...not expecting that. I cannot wait to see what the next author comes up with! That was AWESOME.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 01:01 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

Hahahahah - what a secret! 

I actually think Jim would freak out if Karen mentioned getting engaged!  I'd love to see that on the show, actually.  What a great JimResponse we could see!

Keep it up! (Yeah, I know - TWSS.) 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 12:42 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

watermelon margaritas? Ewwwwwwwwwwwww.

Karen's a transgender? LOL!!!! I guess she had her Adam's apple removed, too. :D 

Loved Jim's  “If you don't know, then there's nothing I can tell you.”

Heh heh heh. I hope she gets a chance to throw that back at a guy who is sleeping with a transgendered person and apparently never caught on.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 12:16 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

Mox -- I was totally kidding with my Round Robin Ch. 1 review!  And do you have Jim/Karen engagement on the brain or WHAT?  It makes me a little sick to think about, even in jest, though.  (The engagement, not the whole trannie issue).

How soon before Jim finds out?  Hee! 

Reviewer: LadyLuck Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 12:10 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

oh good lord! hahahaha, just... good lord!

 you'd think that jim would pick up on something...

Reviewer: Weetzie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 12:08 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

AHHHH!! WOW....

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 12:07 pm Title: Moxie's chapter

AH HAHAHAHAHAHA.  BEST SECRET EVER.

Not only did you do such a great job at writing the chapter (especially with that little Jim/Pam scene --- wow!) but the SECRET????  OMG.  

I've literally spent the last two minutes running around the office in circles giggling to myself.  You definitely win.

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