Date: March 09, 2007 12:04 pm Title: Moxie's chapter
Sweet mother of all that is holy.
Moxie, you are diabolical.
Date: March 09, 2007 08:24 am Title: GreenFish's chapter
I hate Kelly too but that's the way to keep us wanting more.
Author's Response:
It's mean, isn't it? Hehe.... thanks for the comment!
Date: March 09, 2007 07:20 am Title: GreenFish's chapter
You think you are being funny - pushing the "secret" on to me - well, we'll see who's laughing soon enough... ;-)
Author's Response: You're a little shocked by how it all came out yourself, aren't you? I can't wait to see what Sophia does with it. Oooooooh.
Date: March 08, 2007 10:24 pm Title: GreenFish's chapter
You know Pam's last line in this chapter? Yeah. I direct it at you, Greenfish. Big time. How dare you cliffhang sharky's cliffhanger!!
Too cruel. But I'm completely hooked.
Author's Response: Yeah, no problem. I can deal with the hatin'. Especially after Mox came up with THAT secret. Hee...
Date: March 08, 2007 09:34 pm Title: GreenFish's chapter
GreenFish -- you are so cruel, stringing us along! And having Jim & Karen see "Zodiac" this past weekend -- ha! That is dawesome!
Author's Response: I figured I had to be timely, right? Thanks for the comments... and yes, I (was) a mean, mean person. And now Moxie is more mean. Hee.
Date: March 08, 2007 09:31 pm Title: GreenFish's chapter
No way! GF, are you serious? Oh man. What have I started.
Author's Response: Only the greatest story that ever lived? Maybe... ;)
Date: March 08, 2007 07:49 pm Title: GreenFish's chapter
Wow. Greenfish, you and Sharky have done such a great job with this.
BUT, I can't believe you left us hanging. You are evil, like a hobbit.
The pressure is on the next person...
Author's Response: I can only take that as a compliment. "Like a hobbit." Nice.
Date: March 08, 2007 07:12 pm Title: GreenFish's chapter
Eeeeeeeevil! Oh, the suspense....
Author's Response: I know. I'm so glad Moxie posted so quickly. I probably would have had my own heart-attack, waiting for it.
Date: March 08, 2007 07:08 pm Title: GreenFish's chapter
Ok, remind me to never write after you..... j/k. this was so fun and you did Kelly very very well. can't wait to see the next part.
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it. I can't wait to see the next next part, now.
Date: March 08, 2007 06:53 pm Title: GreenFish's chapter
Oh, I see now....every chapter will be a cliffhanger to torture us...hmmmph! Someone better spill the secret. Don't go dragging it out forever like G. Daniels.
Hits head on keyboard. Sigh...Go Moxie!
Author's Response: Thanks to Moxie, we fixed that little problem. Now the question is -- is it real? Is it fake? How will Jim react? Ooooh, the cliffhanger continues!!! YES!!
Date: March 08, 2007 06:49 pm Title: GreenFish's chapter
Oh, my God. I hate you...well, not really. I need to know Karen's secret!
Author's Response: Well... now that you know ... how do you feel? *smirk*
Date: March 08, 2007 06:44 pm Title: GreenFish's chapter
COME ONNNNN!!! AHHHH!!!! TELLL TELLLL TELLLL !!
Author's Response: The suspense is awful, isn't it? Especially not knowing where it's going to GO, now.... hehehehe...
9 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2007 06:22 pm Title: GreenFish's chapter
What a brilliant idea! This will be so much fun to read. I can't wait to find out Kelly's secret about Karen, so - Next!
Author's Response: I could only wish I'd thought of it. I can't wait to see what happens next, either! Thanks for reading!
Date: March 08, 2007 05:14 pm Title: GreenFish's chapter
GAH my internet gave out right as i was about to read it. First off, minor thing - its Sudoku.
But, grr, I hate you! Just like Pam! Cause, seriously. GRRR
Author's Response: OK, I think I can go fix that mistake now, so I will. Hee... just keep reading to see what happens. I'm sure it'll all end up good in the end. Hopefully....
Date: March 08, 2007 03:34 pm Title: sharky's chapter
Fantastic
Ms. GreenFish - you've got a litte bit of an evil streak and I like it.
Mostly because - you know - Moxie's in the hot seat and not me. ;)
Seriously. Great job you guys. Can't wait to see what's next!!!
Moxie you'd better reveal the secret or else I'll hurt you. :)
Not your fingers of course - you need them to finish the story - and by story I don't just mean this one....
Author's Response: I KNOW. And I'm so glad she revealed it, because I was about ready to die, y'know? I'm interested to see where this goes, and if I'm going to have to pick this one up again. Oh, boy.
Date: March 08, 2007 03:32 pm Title: GreenFish's chapter
AAAAaaaaaaaaaargh!
You guys are killing me! This is great! Keep going!
Author's Response: Hehe. So. My diabolical plan worked. YES. Thank you for falling right into it. (And thanks for reading. :)
Date: March 08, 2007 03:05 pm Title: sharky's chapter
ahhh watts the seeeeecreetttttt
Author's Response: I don't know! Round robins are pretty cool.
Date: March 08, 2007 02:17 pm Title: sharky's chapter
Ooh, Kelly has a secret!
Great idea guys! I look forward to seeing the rest.
Author's Response: And she's not going to tell!
Date: March 08, 2007 01:48 pm Title: sharky's chapter
Oh, MAN. killersharky, you kill me. This is such an great premise!!! Okay. I will try to get to this tonight ... or tomorrow. WOW, THE PRESSURE. Thanks for starting this! Okay, I have to think about this. Wow. Okay... *fans self*
Author's Response: And you responded awesomely! You are a scholar and a gentleman!
Date: March 08, 2007 11:40 am Title: sharky's chapter
This is so fun! I'm anxious to see how this all works out, but I wonder if Greenfish is pulling hair out thinking, what secret about Karen!!!! Can't wait to see!
Author's Response: Looks like GF did the smart thing and dodged the question. ;)
Date: March 08, 2007 11:20 am Title: sharky's chapter
Wow. Great start! Now I'm on pins and needles, and GreenFish is under the gun!
Was your Kelly wink a purposeful call-back to Kelly in Boys and Girls (2nd base?). That Kelly knows what she's doing...
Thanks for this.
Author's Response: I never thought about that callback. Wow. I'm more geniuser than I thought. ;) Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2007 10:49 am Title: sharky's chapter
I am very afraid. :X :-)
Author's Response: You're a very good writer, Moxie, who is going to give us a good answer, right?
Date: March 08, 2007 09:38 am Title: sharky's chapter
Very fun start, Sharky! Am really excited to read this, as the lineup of writers is a-MA-zing!
Author's Response: Well, we do have some great writers, but I'm just along for the ride.
Date: March 08, 2007 09:34 am Title: sharky's chapter
i wasn't going to read anything until tomorrow, but this caught my eye and now it has my interest... can't wait to see how greenfish continues it :)
Author's Response: It has my interest too after that GF chapter.
Date: March 08, 2007 09:26 am Title: sharky's chapter
Awesome job sharky! I love Kelly's "super sneaky" behavior. This kept me smilnig the whole way though.
Can't wait for GreenFish's part!!
Author's Response: Because you know she's not good at super sneaky.