Reviews For Paradise City
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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 09:24 am Title: Meeting

oooh, i want more :) cause, it is getting good (better).

and creed - so funny 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 06:41 am Title: Meeting

Sounds like a promising start and I can't wait to read more. ove all the little conversations going on in this fic.

Reviewer: Maybe Once Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2007 05:09 pm Title: Best Friends

Oh, I loves me a sassy Pam!   Yeay for that!    More, please!

Author's Response: thanks yous!!! more coming!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2007 08:04 am Title: Best Friends

Ah yes, Michael. hoes before Bros.... that man has so many issues :P


Author's Response: lol, that goes without saying

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 11:43 pm Title: Best Friends

Can I just say that I am cheering for school-yard Pam here!?  Sticking her tongue out at Karen = hilarious!  I am pro-Karen defemation since it will never happen on the show :)

Author's Response: I hear ya. All hail the jammyness

Reviewer: Beth Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 09:16 pm Title: Best Friends

Ok, this story is getting even better!  I loved the last part between Pam and Karen...I really love them being catty towards each other.  I loved how you made Jim act in this chapter. I was expecting him to be mad at Pam or something, but I am so glad you didn't take that route.  Can't wait to see what's next and I am glad this story will be long.  I really like where your going with it!

Author's Response: That means a lot. Thanks a bunch!!!

Reviewer: colorblind Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 09:05 pm Title: Aftermath

Awesome to see Pam fighting back with Karen.  It's time she grow a spine.  When is Jim returning!?  More, please!

Author's Response: Pam vs. Karen...can I see catfight of the centruy. We all knew it was coming. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: the_chosen_one00 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 06:03 pm Title: Aftermath

OH MAN! Awesome. I like Pam fighting back. Absolutely terrific story! You should totally continue!!

Author's Response: thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: Weetzie Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 05:43 pm Title: Aftermath

Wow. It's almost cathartic to see Karen being this horrible of a person. Write more, like, right now!


Author's Response: I'm on it!!

Reviewer: Beth Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 05:17 pm Title: Aftermath

ok, I absolutely LOVE this story!  Maybe because I hate Karen...I don't know,  but please, please update this soon!! I cannot wait!! 

Author's Response: Karen= horrible, horrible person. Glad to know I'm not alone.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 05:07 pm Title: Aftermath

I like it. Only small thing - beets is with two e's for the beets veggie that Dwight grows. But this is really cool post-cocktails fic, cause I am really curious what Jan is going to say

Author's Response:

Seems like i don't write the word beets very much, lol. Thanks a bunch!!

Reviewer: bufffy6 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 05:04 pm Title: Aftermath

This is a great story, I hope you continue it! haha i love michael adding his last name to jan's, i could see that happening!

Oh and Pam having some balls, always nice to see 



Author's Response: Would be nice if she grew a pair in the show...

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