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Reviewer: Iris-Dietrich Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2020 12:16 pm Title: Losing the Roommate He Never Knew He Wanted

i love it, want more

Reviewer: ftmill16 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2011 02:26 pm Title: Losing the Roommate He Never Knew He Wanted

All of your work is so awesome. It's a real shame this is left unfinished just when it looks like it's going to take a real interesting turn. I know it's been forever and chances are this will remain unfinished but I beg you, if you have any inclination, please come back and finish it! It's an awesome story and you're a fantastic writer!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2008 11:01 pm Title: Losing the Roommate He Never Knew He Wanted

Hmm ... Over a year seems like a long time to keep people waiting for the next chapter!  I just came across this story tonight.  You shoud finish it!

Reviewer: Snoznoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2008 07:43 am Title: Losing the Roommate He Never Knew He Wanted

Did I ever mention I LOVE this story! And I'm dying to see what happens!! Jim and Pam are so adorable! I like that they both still think they're not completely in love with each other yet. It's awesome. And rare! PLEASE UPDATE!

Reviewer: bcd Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2008 07:55 pm Title: Prologue

I love this! So well written...I just about died when there was no more 'next' to click! Please update!

Reviewer: elly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 25, 2007 10:55 pm Title: Prologue

I just found this and I love this story! It's really good...please update soon!

Reviewer: Kiryn Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2007 04:28 am Title: Losing the Roommate He Never Knew He Wanted

Eek!! Ditto on that - just found this series and PLEASE PLEASE FINISH IT! Am totally loving it, this is a great take on the "Jim and Pam met before Dunder Mifflin" device. If you're looking for a beta or just someone to bounce ideas off of, I will gladly sacrifice myself ;) if it means more of this story. Thanks!!

Reviewer: BillionStanleyNickls Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2007 04:28 pm Title: Losing the Roommate He Never Knew He Wanted

i just found your story & i love it... please update!

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2007 07:34 am Title: Losing the Roommate He Never Knew He Wanted

Whee! I love all of your stories (though I'm secretly jonesing for more Jackson) but I just can't wait to see where you're going to be taking this one. Somehow I think Karen is going to get bitten in the ass, encouraging Pam to move into the building where her boytoy lives (and who it appears Pam has just met.)

Yeah, not liking Karen a bit in this AU. Sounds like a snooty, materialistic, cold, party girl.  What on earth did Jim see in her to propose to her? Maybe I should reread the previous chapters and see if you explain it.

More, please! :D 

Reviewer: emmyred Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 11:22 am Title: Making Plans

This is a great story - please update soon!

Reviewer: singular_impatience Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 05:54 pm Title: Back on Track

line. Good line.

Reviewer: Pamela Beesley Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 11:29 pm Title: Prologue

Seriously, would it be possible for you to write something that I don't like??  I've been reading through your stories, and this came up.  I read it all at once, and then noticed it hasn't been updated in like 3 weeks.  Please say you haven't abandoned it!  I love where you have taken this so far. :)

Reviewer: lena76 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 08:07 am Title: Making Plans

I just want to smack the shit out of Karen! Our little Jim is so clueless when it comes to Karen.......she's gonna hurt him & when she does our little Pamster will be there to pick up pieces....right ? :)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 07:40 am Title: Making Plans

karen is devious! she is so not right for jim!

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 06:36 am Title: Making Plans

Another great chapter!  I like the interplay of Pam and Jim.  You might want to take another quick look at this - there are some formatting and grammatical errors.  Also, it's confusing when you segue to Karen and her illicit affair - maybe consider putting some sort of break in there...

 

Anyway, great stuff!  Can't wait for another chapter :) 

Reviewer: ayla Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Making Plans

How did I miss this?? Great story, I'm hooked!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Making Plans

Ooh, Karen is evil!  And I am loving all the references (Will Farrell, Brown, SNL, and on  -- hee!)  

I am eagerly awaiting Karen's comeuppance!! 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 05:32 pm Title: Making Plans

Your Karen is really skanky.  And the guy she's cheating with is a real class act as well.  Blech for them!  Jim really needs to drop Karen soon.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 07:23 am Title: Someone to Help You Up When You Fall Down

oh, i am lovinb this. and pam got into stanford!jim better go out there with her. and.... everything.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 07:03 am Title: Back on Track

Jim=amazing. I loved Pam's painting. And oh, yeah, just incase you dodn't figure it out Roy=sucks.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:58 am Title: Stranger Than Fiction

One tiny thing, near the end you did stranger that fiction, instead of Than. And I really wanted to see that movie.

And I LOVE chocolate chip oatmeal cookies - those really are crack. So awesome.

and i am loving this set up, so off to read more 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 01:17 pm Title: Someone to Help You Up When You Fall Down

Wow, your Karen is quite the schemer.  Hate her!  Why doesn't she just find someone else and leave Jim and Pam in bliss?  That would be good.

I'm enjoying your story! 

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 07:22 am Title: Someone to Help You Up When You Fall Down

Oh dear lord, will these two ever be able to work it out?  I'm enjoying this so much :)

Reviewer: justy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 05:59 am Title: Someone to Help You Up When You Fall Down

Gah! Karen is a bitch, lol.

And Califonia? That's interesting! Can't wait to see how that turns out. 

Reviewer: lena76 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 05:42 am Title: Prologue

Wow....Karens such a Bitch...... Yay! for Pam though :)

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