Reviews For The Mole
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Reviewer: josephine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2009 07:06 pm Title: Monday

I loved this! What a cute premise and so wonderfully played out. As a Catholic who often loses her keys, I loved the reference to St. Anthony ;) well done! Thank you for this beautiful piece.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2009 11:54 am Title: Friday

Aaaand, that'll teach Karen not to know who Bob Vance is. This was so very cute, and Phyllis is just nosy, kind, and mean enough to pull this off. Great read.

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27, 2007 03:46 pm Title: Friday

Well this is just about the sweetest thing ever, and using our favorite little Nosy as the perfect Match-Maker!!! What a fantastic, fantastic fic!

Reviewer: stretchpants515 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2007 09:54 am Title: Monday

Sweet story!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:55 pm Title: Friday

Jim looked at Pam's breasts. Sorry that made me laugh!
This was so sweet and cool and funny and about a million other postivie words to describe it!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:50 pm Title: Thursday

They haven't seemed like much of friends this season have they? I was listening to a song earlier, and it was like, about friends, and I was like, yeah, thats Jim Pam friendship. Even without relationship, friendship they had was amazing.
Go Phyllis with her mad paper selling skills!
I like your examples for why you pray to Saint Anthony. Who cares about keys when there is lost LOVE at stake.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:46 pm Title: Wednesday

Aww, it was supposed to be a prank, but it turned sad. Jim loves Pam for who she is. He totally does. I think Pam could be dressed like a giant potato and Jim would love her.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:40 pm Title: Tuesday

Perfect prank on Dwight. I hate thinking of pranks, because I never can!
And I am so jealous of Pam being a size 6. How odd is it that in Casino Night I was like, damn, she has a really small waist. And some other odd thoughts like that. I am totally straight. Just, odd.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:32 pm Title: Monday

I love how Phyllis calls him Bob Vance. I almost expected her to say Bob Vance, Vance Refridgeration even!
I love how giddy Eric is... he is such a Jim Pam fan it seems!
Monday is off to a good start....

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 09:01 am Title: Friday

Yay Phyllis!  I know it's pretty common to play up her being the matchmaking but I really liked that she was also doing it all specifically for the show.  And a happy ending!  And a mysterious disappearance of Karen!

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2007 12:26 am Title: Friday

Very nicely done! Thank goodness for meddlers! I really enjoyed this!

Author's Response: If only it really happened...thanks!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2007 04:09 pm Title: Friday

I'm so glad I waited until this story was finished to read it! I love Phyllis as the mole...she's perfect in the role. She did a great job of getting them together...very subtle.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad the waiting paid off!

Reviewer: Skedundie Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2007 12:47 am Title: Tuesday

"After all, Karen was the one who was so rude about her perfume from Bob Vance."

 I don't know why but I nearly choked laughing at this. I like how she keeps referring to him as Bob Vance. :-)

Author's Response: Don't we all refer to him as Bob Vance? ;)

Reviewer: aurorasmile Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 11:47 pm Title: Friday

YAY!!!  Karen's gone!! Jim and Pam had a fun time!!  I hope there are more chapters coming

Author's Response: Friday is it! But thanks for the encouragement!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 09:36 pm Title: Friday

Go Phyllis. 

Adorableness all around sharky.  Thanks for this. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks hugs!

Reviewer: Snarkland Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 04:50 pm Title: Friday

AWWWW!  That was wonderful!  My heart is singing.  Thank you so much Sharky!  :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 02:00 pm Title: Friday

Aw, this was so sweet! Phyllis did good :) I know it's not canon, but this has redeemed Phyllis in my eyes after that whole wedding-stealing business...

Author's Response: Yeah, Phyllis is normally pretty cool. Thanks!

Reviewer: lama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 12:37 pm Title: Friday

I do believe my favorite thing about this whole story is how well you consistently captured Phyllis!  Excellent job sharky!  This was so much fun!

Author's Response: Thanks! I was struggling a bit with her so I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 11:08 am Title: Friday

That was so perfectly romantic.  I loved this story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 10:43 am Title: Friday

Oh, Phyllis. All it took was 4 days and she had the entire situation resolved. She rocks! Very fun story!

Author's Response: yeha, the 4 days wasn't too realistic but it needed to be done!

Reviewer: Dooflegna Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 10:36 am Title: Friday

A very lovely story.  You're a fine writer, with a good knack for plot arc.  I like that this story had a nice, natural conclusion.  Keep up the good work :D

Author's Response: Yeah, I was a bit worried that there were still a few open-ended things so thanks for commenting on the ending. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 09:56 am Title: Friday

Oh, such a nice ending!  I especially like Jim casually going to the candy dish!  Such a great visual to signify that things are now as they should be.

And... KarentheJimSlayer is now KarentheBadMemory.  Thank goodness.

Author's Response: Oh, KarentheBadMemory. I like that.

Reviewer: fasterthansnakes Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 09:27 am Title: Monday

everyone, and I mean everyone needs a fairy god-phyllis :)

I love that Jim was so excited to see Pam and how easy it is to see that they were meant to be together.

Author's Response: I want one too. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 09:08 am Title: Friday

Really great idea. Really cute execution! I completely enjoyed Phyllis the mole! Thanks so much!

Author's Response: She was a good mole, wasn't she? Thanks!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 09:06 am Title: Friday

yay!!  What a good job!!!  Though I am slightly disappointed we didn't get to hear the table conversation, and that this kept its K+ rating.  But you know I have a good imagination!  ;D

Thanks for writing this!!!! 

Author's Response: What are you trying to imply about their conversation? ;) I thought about writing it, but then realized if it was from Phyllis's POV, she probably wouldn't have heard it. That's why I liked trying to write a non Jim/Pam POV -- it was fun but tough. Thanks for the review!

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