1 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2020 02:28 pm Title: Natural Emotions
Found this on the random story listing, sorry it isn't finished. It's a really nice way of reconnecting them.
Date: January 14, 2010 09:42 am Title: Fifteen Minutes With You
Dang it! I got totally sucked into this story, which I'm thoroughly enjoying, and it's incomplete!!!!!!!!! ::faints dead away::
Date: March 23, 2007 07:55 am Title: Natural Emotions
eew finals suck. i don't have mine for a bit and just got over midterms. but it was a good chapter, and so that is good. but i can't write more as i have class :(
Date: March 19, 2007 06:49 am Title: Natural Emotions
what? a cliffhanger? with a warning that you won't be updating soon??? are finals REALLY that important??? :) j/k it's a great fic though. i hope you can update sooner rather than later.
Date: March 18, 2007 09:03 pm Title: Natural Emotions
Awkward dancing around each other. Been there.
Good luck on the finals, I'll read more when you get to it.
Date: March 18, 2007 10:36 am Title: Natural Emotions
Ok, you are officially mean!!! Good luckwith finals -- as if you can leave Pam & Jim just hanging there -- sexual tension so thick I need a cold shower!
Date: March 18, 2007 09:30 am Title: Natural Emotions
okay, maybe a little cheesey, but really good! And I can't believe you ended it there!! I love how you keep having one of them mention how late it is or something, but they don't actually want to part. Great. :) I'm really looking forward to the rest of this
Date: March 18, 2007 09:07 am Title: Natural Emotions
This is coming along well. I'm with you on not liking song-fics, but I like how you wove the lyrics in on this one. I think it flows well, and I'm enjoying the way you took one of those moments from the show that could have turned out so different if only 3 or 4 seconds had elapsed (I still want to know what Pam was going to say right before Jim kissed her in Casino Night!).
Nice work--can't wait for more! --C.
Date: March 18, 2007 08:45 am Title: Natural Emotions
AW cute yet cheesey! I dont mind as long as they are together!! =)
8 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 07:53 pm Title: Nothing's Changed, I Still Love You
I'm really enjoying this story. It is amazing how much little things can change our lives without us even knowing! It's a little "Sliding Doors", which I love. Look forward to reading more!
Date: March 17, 2007 07:30 pm Title: Nothing's Changed, I Still Love You
oooh, spending the night together.
haha, keep writing.
Date: March 17, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Nothing's Changed, I Still Love You
That next chapter better be longer! Just kidding. But not, you're a really good writer and I can't wait for the next chap. SO update soon!
8 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Nothing's Changed, I Still Love You
Awesome, I love The Smiths! Great story!
Date: March 17, 2007 07:07 pm Title: Nothing's Changed, I Still Love You
Um, okay, I LOVE where this is going. I love that Pam knew the song and gave Jim the choice of two parts, and... of course I love the part he chose.
Whenever you get to it, I'll be reading!
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 07:02 pm Title: Nothing's Changed, I Still Love You
OMG PLEASE HAVE IT TOMORROW MORNING! It will be the best birthday present I will probably get, since i do not have a boyfriend & it is my birtday tomorrow! Great work, I'm glas hes going home w/ her = )
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 04:50 pm Title: These Things Take Time
Good stuff. Too bad you couldn't have been a writer for the show last fall. Very realistic.
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 04:13 pm Title: These Things Take Time
Hey this is lovely! I loved it, very realistic! Like I said last chapter, I wish this happened! =)
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 01:00 pm Title: These Things Take Time
Very cute! I was chanting to myself "tell him...kiss him!" lol Update soon!!
Date: March 17, 2007 12:30 pm Title: These Things Take Time
You are off to a good start. I tihnk you've captured the characters well. Looking forward to reading more from you!
Date: March 17, 2007 12:22 pm Title: These Things Take Time
this = awesome. i loved this chapter. both of them just need a little shove, and then they can both be happy. awesome
8 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 11:28 am Title: These Things Take Time
Oh, if only....I really like this, but it makes me sad too. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
Date: March 17, 2007 11:06 am Title: These Things Take Time
Wow -- you are really making me sad that they didn't go for coffee! Damn Michael! Damn Karen!
Date: March 17, 2007 11:05 am Title: These Things Take Time
Very nice! I could definitely see them skirting around the issues a bit like this.
Author's Response: A fast review! I'm still cleaning up the chapter a bit! But thanks! I definitely don't think they'd be too forward... even though that's how it usually goes down in fics. But I'm still trying to keep this relatively short so we'll see ;)
8 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 10:34 am Title: Fifteen Minutes With You
ooo this was awesome!!! If only...it had really happened like that. So great. Can't wait to read the next chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks! I think I'll post the next one now...
Date: March 17, 2007 09:33 am Title: Fifteen Minutes With You
I often think about that scene. If Pam had just said something like, "I kind of meant it as sort of a ... date?" It would have gone a WHOLE different way.
I think Jim would have been more likely to ask if Dwight had a girlfriend rather than a lover. "Lover" isn't the kind of word most of us use in regular conversation... well, except Michael.
I'm definitely interested to see your take on this. There are SO many times this season where slightly different wording would have resulted in total JAM-iness.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that would have changed a lot, too. I thought Jim might use 'lover' because it's the kind of word Dwight (or Michael) would use. I agree that Jim would never use it normally.
Thanks for the review :)