Date: March 19, 2007 10:49 am Title: Chapter 4 Later That Night
Smutty to the extreme. Excellent
Author's Response: Thanks, Doof glad you approve. :)
9 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2007 05:45 am Title: Chapter 4 Later That Night
There. Was that so hard?TWSS...
Nice job here. I LOVE that you had him meeting her on the way out the door, going to get her just as she was coming to him. This rounded out the story beautifully, and I love the sweetness/sultriness of the chapter. Very nice job all around!
-C.
Author's Response: Thanks, CH! Since it was for you, I'm glad!
Date: March 19, 2007 04:17 am Title: Chapter 4 Later That Night
Yay!!! =] lol
Date: March 18, 2007 09:03 am Title: Chapter 1
You have such bad timing. Pam's supply closet fantasy immediately after Maybe Once's The Hot Sex in the Supply Closet Story Badfic posting? I couldn't read you two paragraphs without laughing. I think there may just be something wrong with my brain.
Author's Response: I actually read that right after I posted mine, and laughed. That was a random thought, and only one paragraph of the entire story.
5 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was just totally hot.
Date: March 17, 2007 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 3 The Club
Wow. Um, yeah, I liked that.
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah that rocked !! May I say I like the way that you think ;)
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 3 The Club
Wow. That was hott. = )
Date: March 17, 2007 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 3 The Club
Oh my, VL...Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks, CH. It's a high compliment coming from you!
Date: March 17, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 2- Jim's Day
Oh PLEASE post a new chapter SOON.....!!!!!!
Date: March 17, 2007 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, VL. Hot stuff. I do enjoy stories where it's acknowledged that they fantasize about each other -- because it's realistic. Can't wait to read more! At the club, drinking ... dancing? Ooooh man.
Author's Response: All finished, sweetie. Check out the last chapter. Thanks for the review.
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa...I think I actually blushed there at the end....I can't wait to see the outcome :) !!! Lovin' it :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Lena. I posted the rest, I hope you like it.