Date: July 19, 2009 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW! WOW! WOW! that was amazing - i loved it so much. great job for 2 hours! please keep going!
8 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2008 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooooh really good, although I'd love to have seen Roy punch Jim, and then for Jim to fight back and defend himself... hot sexy fighting Jim mmmm!!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2008 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww.. cute! I have to agree, manly macho Jim is hot!
Date: March 28, 2007 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh and forgot to mention:
haha! i laughed when you mentioned blades of glory. hm... how will Jim react when he realizes that Pam is really an actress in disguise!
Date: March 28, 2007 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
yes! this is what needs to happen! THIS right here. Totally. Go make greg daniels do this.
Date: March 27, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is very nice. I like your comment about the "amazing girlfriend" line. Karen is complimenting herself, perhaps because Jim is not too interested in complimenting her? Plus, of course she's talking about herself as an amazing girlfriend where Pam can hear her...
I adore "black and blue were never my colors." That's a wonderful line. I don't think Jim would ever say "m'lady". Andy would, Dwight or Michael probably, but I don't think Jim would. YMMV, of course.
I really like the series of images that run through Jim's head right before he decides to clock Roy. Jim really gets his mad on. I like Dwight stepping in with his little self-defense speech. Dwight can be such a jerk, and then he can be so sweet as well! What a great character!
Oh, and Kelly's "squeals of delight"? She would definitely be squealing with delight! I wish Roy had said fiancee instead of girlfriend, though. It's a much bigger deal (IMO) to kiss an engaged woman than "just" a girlfriend. Might I say it packs a bigger punch? (Fight! Fight! Fight!)
Anyway, I enjoyed this. I'm looking forward to seeing the show April 5, especially since watching the Yahoo!TV previews - awesome.
Author's Response:
It is a little OOC, which I actually planned on making it. It fell into character more as I wrote it, which kind of diluted the "m'lady" line, but I decided to leave it in as a little throwback/jab at Dwight's speech. (Which, by the way, is completely true - I looked it up!)
Anyway, I'm so glad you liked so much of it. It was actually insanely fun to write. I only wish it could happen this way!
Author's Response: ...and I made Roy say "girlfriend" because of that little scene from S2 where he referred to her as that and not "fiance".
Date: March 27, 2007 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was sooo excited when I saw a Jam fanfic with a Go Lyric. What a good song! And I was even more excited when I read the story. I love angry!Jim and you wrote this very well.
Author's Response:
It's so funny how many Jim/Pam fans are Hanson fans as well. Sometimes I think Hanson just might as well make an album simply of songs that describe their relationship. :)
I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: March 26, 2007 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
"I don't need that," he replied softly. "I need you." Definitely my fave line! And any story that has a hanson song as a title is automatically amazing in my book! Lovely job and its just touching!
Author's Response:
I'm a bit of a sucker for matching Hanson to Jim/Pam. When fandoms collide, I suppose.
And thank you! I was worried it was too...mushy. Glad you liked it! <3