Date: November 06, 2006 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
A lovely little story. Very, very cute. I did think that the small conflicts between Jim and Pam felt a little forced--if you're going to write fluff, don't be afraid to write fluff! And believe me, this is great fluff. Also, the Creed chapter, while definately Creed, felt out of place.
But these are really minor things. It was a nice set. And extra brownie points for one of the all-time greatest titles.
Date: August 10, 2006 04:13 am Title: Chapter 6
adorable ending :)
i love how every chapter had the feel of the character who finds out and you did a great job of progressing the JAM story while focusing on the other characters. this whole series just made me giggle :)
Thanks again! That was my plan and I'm glad it worked out.
Date: August 08, 2006 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
This is the perfect way to end this really fun series. You capture the cringe-inducing nature of the series perfectly in the letter-reading scene, and Pam's letter is just lovely.
Very, very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comments.
Date: August 06, 2006 09:17 am Title: Chapter 5
Very clever and fun - especially liked Creed's perspective (love his reference to 'the young salesman with the hair.')
Thank you! Writing from Creed's perspective flowed easily out of my head (oh, that's scary thought!)
Date: August 06, 2006 03:54 am Title: Chapter 5
HAHAHA! These last 2 chapters were freaking hilarious. Creed is so creepy and you captured him PERFECTLY. Of all the people to overhear....KELLY??? LOL! Love it.
Author's Response: Thank you for the awesome comments!