Date: August 10, 2008 02:08 pm Title: The Confession
This was awesome! And your characters are so realistic, I could actually see them do and say what you made them do and say, while reading. Excellent! I'm really in love with this story (and with Jim, god, could he be any sweeter?!), so I hope you'll continue soon!
Date: April 07, 2007 06:36 am Title: Make overs: A sign of the apocalypse?
I think that would be the worst part - watching the footage. Or having to throw out all the clothes. or going shopping. really, i think i would be mortified by it all.
And Jim is just so sweet and protective and great
Date: April 05, 2007 04:10 pm Title: Make overs: A sign of the apocalypse?
Aw, Jim just rules for completely changing her mood like that. He said all the right things. :)
Author's Response: I know, everyone needs a Jim when they are having a bad time to swoop in and make it all ok. Except lately on the show. Lately Pam needs a Jim to help her deal with Jim. Ugh...
Date: April 05, 2007 02:46 pm Title: Make overs: A sign of the apocalypse?
I like Angela's POV (too funny, too Angela!), Stanley getting excited (hey, must be Pretzel Day), and Karen thinking Jim did it as a joke (how dumb is Karen?).
So, will we see that Jim was glancing longingly at Pam all week and Pam was doing the same? Will we see Karen take a long drive off a short pier? Will I stop asking questions? I will await the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! All questions will be answered, in time. Except for one: Karen is very, very dumb. And she has cooties. You'll have to wait for the rest.
Date: April 05, 2007 01:59 pm Title: Make overs: A sign of the apocalypse?
This is so much fun - and I can't help but be pleased how protective Jim is. I think that's him dead on. I really look forward to the coming chapters!!
Author's Response: Thank yo! That especially means a lot coming from one of my favorite authors!
Author's Response: Just wanted to note that was supposed to be Thank you, with a u at the end. Not yo....
Date: April 04, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Ryan: An Evil Genius?
What a great idea! I just love "W.N.T.W." and am really looking forward to your take on it. I can't wait to "see" the results of Pam's makeover. Hopefully her show will also have a cute hairdresser!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: April 01, 2007 08:39 pm Title: Ryan: An Evil Genius?
Wow. Isn't Karen's huge grin going to be wiped off her face when Pam comes back even hotter? How dumb is Karen?
I love Angela peering over the wall glaring. Totally what she'd be doing.
I look forward to more.
Date: April 01, 2007 08:35 pm Title: The Confession
What a fantastic concept. I like Ryan's POV here. My favorite part is "Man, I always have to tell her how great she looks. Always. I mean, I don’t mind. I guess. I just don’t get why she needs me to tell her all the time"! I'm going to go see what happens next!
Date: April 01, 2007 05:46 am Title: The Confession
ohmigosh so good, I would make a small suggestion, go back and edit your first chapter so that there are some breaks in it, right now it's one long paragraph (which i know a lot of people including myself have trouble reading) other than that, A-maazing /Kelly
Author's Response: Cool, thanks! I know I should probably use a beta...