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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:11 am Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

I think there's an error in this one.  Shouldn't you say "loved it" instead of "didn't like it", in "are you sure you were lying when you told him you didn’t like it?"?

I love this chapter, maybe even more than the prior one.  My favorite: "Maybe you could see if you could do something, um, nice for her if you know what I mean”
[I’m on it, Angela]".  That's so good!

Is there anyone we need to smite yet? 



Author's Response: Thanks for finding that error! I've fixed it now. And I really appreciate your feedback....so far, no smiting!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:08 am Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

Sex with Dwight is the eitome of odd. It sends shivers down my spine.
This was just... wow, i love this chapter. It explains so much about Dwight and Angela to where its sweet not creepy!
I think you can be allergic to a color of food. I basically detest all red foods. apples and pepporoni i think are the only red things i eat. and red m&ms!
this is just, great.
(now god, again, work on JK shirtless :))

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:07 am Title: I'm Watching the Show Too, Folks

I read this chapter elsewhere; I don't remember if I commented/was able to comment.

Anyway, I think this is awesome.  If there's anyone who doesn't think this is awesome, we should totally smite them. 

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 08:00 pm Title: I'm Watching the Show Too, Folks

Oh, this was fun and unusual.  I really liked it!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 06:22 pm Title: I'm Watching the Show Too, Folks

I just love this!!! So refreshing and different. Just fun!

Reviewer: ayla Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 03:13 pm Title: I'm Watching the Show Too, Folks

Ha! I feel like I got reprimanded by God. Well, that's a first for fanfic. But really God, only half of us want Jim shirtless? Somebody's not reading the forums....

Reviewer: ilovepocky Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 01:45 pm Title: I'm Watching the Show Too, Folks

OH. xDD.

 This is CUTE. I can't find any other word to describe it. 

 GO GOD~!. xD. 

Reviewer: Supervixen Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 01:17 pm Title: I'm Watching the Show Too, Folks

Hilarious:)

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 12:58 pm Title: I'm Watching the Show Too, Folks

Ha!  That cracks me up that God has a standing appointment with Angela.  Not surprising, though.  :)  I guess I'll just have to trust Him with Jim and Pam--but that doesn't mean I won't keep asking!  ;)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 12:41 pm Title: I'm Watching the Show Too, Folks

Oh yay! You posted it here. I already placed it as one of my recommendations here, cause I loved it.

:). Oh, and thanks for the reply to my review though FF.net, cause I loved that.

Now god, again, get to work on that shirtless JK! 

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