Date: August 08, 2007 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Who would Wally do?
This is just priceless. Seriously...love it! Sorry it took me so long to read it! You've nailed all the voices. Especially Dwight - which is scary - but so good! Especially when he was talking about what plants were good for building huts...and he was thinking something like no that is one is AWFUL for building huts. SO FREAKING AWESOME. Pam and Jim are just adorable too -- you've totally got their playful banter down!
Date: July 28, 2007 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Survivors Split Up
Awesome! I heart this story! :)
Oh, wait. I was going to be done, but then I remembered that I never leave you nice long reviews like I used to and I felt a little guilty. So here are the things I loved about this chapter.
Angela in a gangsta outfit, the fact that you named it Pebblitis, and Ryan trying to be authoritative!
Nice work, Muggins!
Date: July 05, 2007 08:07 am Title: Chapter 2 - Rescuers on the Horizon
“Jim…darling….Jim…. sweetie…Jim…” - Muggins, did you put that part in just for me? I'm going with that.
I love that Roy grabbed Katy to save her. And I greatly prefer your ending of the 27 seconds of silence over the "I'm cold" ending!
Angela thinks the Party Planning Committee is in charge of the island. Awesome.
Date: April 09, 2007 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Rescuers on the Horizon
but he had to because.... if it was her, well, he had to do whatever she said.
Yes, Jim is that kind of guy isn't he? Ahhhh. I love him. This is so funny and touching and great. I love Dwight and Michael and that Jim saved Pam. Soo great, I can't wait for more! Also your theme song interpretation is awesome! :)
Date: April 09, 2007 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Rescuers on the Horizon
Oh, the 27 seconds of silence turned into a romantic beginning for Jim and Pam. Hooray! And Roy tried to save Katy... did he totally fail? I don't remember seeing anything of Katy in Chapter 1...
And “Jim…darling….Jim…. sweetie…Jim…” - if only!
But... have I missed some Girly-Girl (I'll go check), or are you on a break?
I love that Michael is thinking of a presentation (magic, magic, magic!) instead of "what might be in there that we could use on an island"?
Save the receptionist. Save the World.
Date: April 04, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome to Angela's Isle
Hooray for Angela's Isle! Dwight started the fire...It was always burning....just kidding. How about our beloved Office mates don't get rescued for, like, a year? Just saying....lol. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: April 04, 2007 03:05 am Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome to Angela's Isle
Oh Muggins, you really have become my favorite author. This is freaking brilliant! I can't wait to find out just exactly how the boat sank.
Poor Pam, so cold. But you know what they say is the best body heat? Heh. Heh.
Date: April 03, 2007 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome to Angela's Isle
Aaand this: "He was probably the only person here who had lived for three days only on twigs and his own urine." will pretty much guarantee that I never read fanfic during dinner ever again.
Great beginning, though! Just don't go forgetting about Girly-Girl Truth or Dare.
I'm actually writing Girly Girl as we speak! :)
And wow, there should be a warning label for moments like that. I remember this first fanfic I ever read and I was at work and it was SMUTTY with a capital "smut" and I just blushed so RED. Everyone thought I was getting heatstroke because THANK GOD, I did the sensible thing and hit alt-ctrl-del. My boss REQUIRES that I have a bottle of water by my desk at all times. Warning Labels. That's what we need.
Date: April 03, 2007 12:22 am Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome to Angela's Isle
Oh this is exciting! I can't believe no one has done a deserted island fic - very good choice. Everyone (including Roy and Jim!) together on a little island? Someone's getting whacked with a coconut.