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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

This made me chuckle.  The poor roommate.  No one should have to listen to Ryan and Kelly have phone sex.  Except maybe Toby, that skeevy little perv.

Seriously, that was fun. 



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: The Library Clerk Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was one of the funniest things I've ever read, ever.  You guys are brilliant!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks!  Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Maybe Once Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

I wonder if that means we'll have a double wedding someday in hell. The bridesmaids will wear red to match the burning, burning fire.

and 

That's it. I'm jumping out the fucking window.

 

I am officially in love with Ryan's roommate. 



Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1

The bridesmaids will wear red to match the burning, burning fire.

Hilarious! I loved the glimpse into Ryan/Kelly this week, and this is like icing on that particular dysfunctional cake!



Author's Response: Hee, thanks! Greatest comparison ever.

Reviewer: Klankie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1

This was hilarious.  I can definitely see a Ryan/Kelly conversation like this.  Poor roomate.  Great job.

Author's Response: Yay, thank you!

Reviewer: kth201 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 08:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Ha ha ha ha. Awesome! "I'm jumping out the fucking window." Yeah, I'd probably be tempted too. Great idea for a story. 

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Fliz0nToast Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 07:54 am Title: Chapter 1

This totally made me laugh!  I feel sorry for Ryan's roommate.

Author's Response: Yay, thanks!

Reviewer: Bailey08 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 07:43 am Title: Chapter 1

I love Ryan and Kelly.  Thanks for this.

Author's Response: Thanks; glad you liked it!

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 07:02 am Title: Chapter 1

I wonder if that means we'll have a double wedding someday in hell. The bridesmaids will wear red to match the burning, burning fire.

hahahahahahaha!  I love this! 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Angryhaiku Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 05:31 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm pretty sure I'm never going to stop laughing!

There were a lot of things that worked well here -- I love that we're getting the roommate's contemptuous response, because it allows for snark and also a slightly squishier side of Ryan. I also love that we're only getting Ryan's side of the conversation; it's a nice dose of Kelly without all of the cliche Kelly dialogue we've read elsewhere.

The bridesmaids will wear red to match the burning, burning fire and That's it. I'm jumping out the fucking window. in particular made me laugh like a banshee.



Author's Response: Thank you!  And yeah, I picture this as being a regular Ryan/Kelly trick, which would drive pretty much anyone completely crazy, particularly if it interfered with their sleep.  Glad you liked it!

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