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Reviewer: Foxesjenna42 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2021 10:45 am Title: Chapter 12

Well written.

Reviewer: Sonni Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 12

This story had me crying like a baby. It's so perfect. The poker chip moment was just beyond perfection. Thank you so much for this.

Author's Response:

Thanks Sonni.   I am really proud of that part I've got to say.  It's been a long time since I read parts of this story.  Thanks for reminding me it was here. :)

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2007 04:58 am Title: Chapter 12

This was a wonderful story. I especially liked how Pam had no idea what to do the morning after, it was so realistic.

You are one of my favorite authors in this fandom, one I'm brand new to. Great job. Off to read more.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it.  It's one of my early ones back when I was oh so optimistic. :)  Thank you for taking the time to review.  It means a lot. :)

Welcome to the madness lapdogdesign!

Reviewer: neptune1 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2006 12:22 am Title: Chapter 12

Perfect ending to a fantastic story. I really enjoyed reading this as it went up chapter by chapter at FF- you did a wonderful job with the angst and fluff. I think you particularly captured their relationship very well, and you painted a very clear picture of them together in the future, joking, loving each other... sigh.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Ahh, yes. Future Jim and Pam are my favorite ever. I don't know if y'all have gotten that yet. LOL!

Reviewer: Colette Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2006 10:28 am Title: Chapter 12

Great.

I don't always think Epilogues work very well, but this one really caps it off perfectly. Their vibe as a longtime married couple is very believable.

Author's Response: I really struggled with just letting it go - but damnit - I want them to be happy no matter what. LOL! Thank you. That's what I was hoping for!

Reviewer: aurorabora Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2006 02:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Yes.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2006 12:51 am Title: Chapter 12

I loved this fic from beginning to end. The part that touched me most in this final chapter was the engraved casino chip. Such a sweet moving gesture.

Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad you liked it. I figured Pam owed him a little something for the suffering she's put him through. ;)

Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 12

I enjoyed the entire story, but especially the happily ever after. My favorite parts of the epilogue - Jim's moment with Mrs. Beesly and the line about being a sucker for his little girls. :)

Author's Response: I can't seem to just let the end be unfinished. And I know I'm just going to be shooting myself in the foot - 'cause I tend to completely tidy things up. SIGH.

Reviewer: lano Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 12

I'm so in love with happily ever after Jim and Pam - especially your version of it.

Author's Response: Why thank you.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 12

Awwwww!!!! Love! Thanks for the sweet, sweet Jam!

Author's Response: Awwwwww!!! Love back at ya. You are most welcome.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 12

Ooooh, so sweet! Wow. Just lovely.

Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Ham and Cheese Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 12

Beautiful epilogue to a beautiful story. I love imagining Jim and Pam, happy forever and ever. Aw!! My favorite touch was the poker chip. :sniffle:

Author's Response: I swear to God these two just write themselves. Honestly. The poker chip thing just flowed. I barely had to think about it. Oh. And here's a tissue. :)

Reviewer: unfold Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 12

The epilogue was so touching. I'm all teary eyed now. I love them so much and I just want it to be like this for them. Is that so much to ask?

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it. I'm even happy you're teary eyed. :) And no. I don't think that's an unreasonable request at all.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love, love, LOVE this story!!

Author's Response: Love, love, LOVE that you do!!

Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 12

"I’m all in, always. Love, Pam"

Best line ever!

Author's Response: I'll be honest. I was pretty impressed with myself for that one. ;) Thank you.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 12

I'm really glad you went for a bonus chapter! This was a lovely ending for a great story. :)

Author's Response: I'm really glad you all weren't like "End it already!!" Thank you!

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