Date: April 08, 2007 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1
I love all kinds of fanfic. Wild AUs, steamy gapfillers that show what the censors won't let us see in canon, schmoopy happy-ever-afters -- you name it, I love it. But I especially like fics that are so realistic that they feel like a transcript of a future episode. And this fic is one of those.
I feel like things between Jim and Pam are going to have to get a little nastier, a little more blunt, probably more hurtful, for the air to ever really be cleared. (Canon asshat!Jim seems headed in that direction.) You've done a great job of showing that here. This is not surprising because I'm a big fan of your other fics. In fact, I'm off to see if there are any of yours that I've missed.
Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2007 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Perfect! I love when Pam says "I'm not one of those people who can instantly get over someone I loved." God, I hope she says something like that on the show. Great job with this!
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2007 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1
loved this.. =)
Date: April 08, 2007 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1
wow. this is beautifully done and felt so real. Everything was so in character, especially the dialog. you should be a writer for the show
Date: April 08, 2007 09:26 am Title: Chapter 1
This is DEFINITELY one of those "from your lips to Greg Daniel's ears" moments......really well done, true to character and still satisfying. Yeay!
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2007 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1
This is wonderful. The dialogue is so sharp and well-paced, and it fits these characters so perfectly. I loved how cruel you let them both be... we've had tastes of that on the show, but we've never seen what would happen if the retaliations went too far.
Date: April 08, 2007 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1
“Not yet. But soon.” YES! Those four words would have made everything OK. Love the "evolved" Pam in this -- Jim has a bit of a smackdown coming to him, if only to clear the air for Jammy Goodness.
Date: April 08, 2007 09:05 am Title: Chapter 1
keep the resolutions stories coming! I'm so loving all the fight it out (and then make-out) stories on the board. I loved this. I loved how she waited for him to figure out her cryptic statement and how dense he was about it. I think that he honestly has no idea about how she feels about him now. Great job.
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2007 08:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, we've got to figure out a way to get you hired on the show.
That was great stuff, obviously. Superb realism and feel for the characters, and a gratifying payoff.