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Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 07:22 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?

HYPERCOLOR!!  That right there made this chapter.  I had a purple one that turned pink.

Anyhoo, fabulous chapter, can't wait for kiss #2.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 07:21 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?

Ok, check Pam for a pulse, to not feel anything while kissing Jim!! (or rather, Jim!!!).  And you cannot possibly leave us all here for very long -- or else you are the worst sort of tease.  

(Toll paid -- and BTW, I have SmartTag and EasyPass!) 

Reviewer: Bailey08 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 07:13 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?

I'm really liking his so far.  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Beth Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 07:01 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?

Ok, i have been busy lately and haven't had as much time to read fanfic, but I saw this story and I just had to read it!  It has not disappointed me yet and I don't think it will.  I just love this story, now I am going to check this site every 2 seconds to see if you have updated yet!  I can't wait!!

Reviewer: oypoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 06:52 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?

ahhhhhhhhhhh. i love this. continue continue continue.

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 06:11 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?

Hypercolor t-shirts? LOL! I haven't thought about those in a zillion years.Go you for remembering what they're called.

Man, Jim trying not to react to Pam's (Pam's) rising hemline was incredibly sexy. As was Jim trying to quash the tenderness that appeared after seeing her photographs (including ones of him.) It all adds up to the feeling of inching up the giant hill of a rollercoaster...it feels like we're right at the top where you stop momentarily before plunging into...everything.

Awesome. Can't wait for more! 

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 06:07 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?

gah! why would you stop there?!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 06:00 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?

I think the kisses (and such) are only going to improve...

And if they don't, that's how it will happen in my brain anyway! 

Reviewer: FinishLine Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 05:55 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

I am in love with this story! It is such a great idea for a plot. But please, you are killing us all with suspense! I can't for the real action to occur, post the next chapter quick

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 05:50 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?

I'm paying my toll and asking for an express pass. Chapters must come faster!!

Reviewer: quietdecember Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 05:38 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?

oh wow

Define soon.. like in five minutes?? *crosses finger*

good job! 

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 05:38 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?

I've got alot of money for those toll booths on the JAM expressway..I really hope the second kiss..is...well....Toll Worthy!!

Reviewer: pyewackett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Ha this is great!! I cant wait to see what happens! It completely backfires, doesn't it? :)

Reviewer: inconsume Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 03:33 pm Title: I'm Sure It Will Be the Worst Sex of My Life

This still has me giggling nervously and humming in excitement. Good on you. 

Author's Response: I really honestly believe the best is yet to come (not tomorrow but the day after's chapter, it's a humdinger)

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 03:22 pm Title: I'm Sure It Will Be the Worst Sex of My Life

yikes. Please update fast!

Author's Response: tomorrow, scout's honor

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 02:31 pm Title: I'm Sure It Will Be the Worst Sex of My Life

Oh, Jim...you have no idea what you're in for. Please let Pam work all her magic! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: oh Pam will be working it alright

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 11:11 am Title: I'm Sure It Will Be the Worst Sex of My Life

YAY!

Author's Response: thanks for reading!

Reviewer: slpchic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 10:41 am Title: I'm Sure It Will Be the Worst Sex of My Life

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry I don't think you made yourself clear, what was it that you wanted? Just kidding, I'm totally flattered, and trust me I know how you feel, that's why it'll be up tomorrow, maybe even late tonight :)

Reviewer: bufffy6 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 10:12 am Title: I'm Sure It Will Be the Worst Sex of My Life

this story is so great, can't wait to see what happens!

poor pam, overhearing that....but this is all she has to do when Jim comes over later, and he'll say Karen who?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-FF41n6HORg 



Author's Response: oh i love that clip, I need to watch that movie asap. oh and as far as the story goes, trust me, she doesn't need the outfit. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lena76 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 10:11 am Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Whoa!!! Can you like update now;) I am giddy with anticipation...Love this !!!!

Author's Response: soon, it will be up tomorrow. already written, scout's honor :)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 09:38 am Title: I'm Sure It Will Be the Worst Sex of My Life

Given the premise, I think the conversation is fairly realistic...

I really like your little homage to The Injury!

Looking forward to the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

This will really be a fic full of homage (so far 30 rock, the injury) anticipate some anchorman action at some point.

I think (or at least I should) that if Karen were in that situation she would literally be flattered enough by Jim's desire to 'make it work' that she would overlook the fact that her pseudo boyfriend was going over to the love of his life's house to...you know.

Reviewer: collardgreens Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 09:20 am Title: I'm Sure It Will Be the Worst Sex of My Life

I'm invested. Quite curious to see where this goes. 

Author's Response: next chapter is the arrival of Jim at Pam's with flowers and wine and he's met with....

Reviewer: Jimpong Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 08:28 am Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Very rarely do I read a fic and am completely jealous of the premise, awesome.

Author's Response: Fo sho, seriously it was the premise I've been dying to read. I've got three other stories going but something about the idea of the the two of them being stupid enough to think a one night stand would help them 'move on' just would not let me go. I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 08:09 am Title: I'm Sure It Will Be the Worst Sex of My Life

Okay, gotta say - there's something insanely hot about the idea of him going over to her apt. specifically to do...what they're going to do (do I see the rating going to MA, perhaps?) And Karen's being relatively down with it? Yes, kind of surreal...yet maybe the good thing about the show leaving her character so vague (kind of a cypher, I think) is that I can suspend disbelief and accept her not freaking out. Really looking forward to the next chapter - soon, I hope?

Author's Response: um....thanks for the reminder, I really should not post the next few chapters without changing the ratings. And yes I think there is something extremely hot about trying not to be into someone and your body telling you something entirely different.

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 07:59 am Title: I'm Sure It Will Be the Worst Sex of My Life

Ouch. Of course Pam overheard that. And even though everything he says is a) intended to reassure Karen, and b) probably perfectly reasonable (the bit about having built it up in his mind to a point it cannot possibly live up to) and something he BELIEVES -- it would still be crushing for Pam to hear him say that the real Pam is just ordinary and nothing special (certainly the way I'd take it if I were in Pam's shoes.) Especially this bit (to Karen):"You're probably the best thing that's ever happened to me, I mean you're beautiful and brilliant..." implying that Pam ISN'T any of those things.

The fact that WE know (hope) he's completely deluded softens the blow a bit, but still. Poor Pam. *hugs her*

More, please! 



Author's Response: I know right, what an ego buster. But Pam will have her revenge, and soon. Delusional!Jim is going down.

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