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Reviewer: oypoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 07:30 am Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Excellent excellent excellent. Im so excited for this to continue. :)

Author's Response: It'll be up tomorrow! Thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: Misao7 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 06:23 am Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Oh, goodness. This will be marvelous, I'm sure. Reminds me a lot of the current Cameron/Chase storyline on House...looking forward to seeing how this goes. =D...

Author's Response: I love House, except I'm a season behind on well everything, thanks for the vote of confidence.

Reviewer: slpchic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 11:27 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Oh it'll be real casual, totlly meaningless....As if!  Update soon! I can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 10:34 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

I am so very intrigued...go on...

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 10:10 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

What a great concept--can't wait to see how "meaningless" it ends up being

 

More soon! 

Reviewer: juteux Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 08:41 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Oooh, I can't wait for the totally hot and meaningless sex! But even when he's being stupid, Jim is always Hot!Jim. 

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 08:17 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Very intriguing idea.  I can't wait to see how this turns out!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 08:16 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Just a little casual, meaningless, "oh my god, we could have been doing this on a regular basis for the last 4 years, but weren't?" sex.

The following line I thought was hilarious: "she’s still staring at him like he’s suggested taking Dwight out behind the Middle School and getting him pregnant".  I almost sombrero-snorted, but was able to stop myself.  Good thing, too, 'cause my husband is in the next room and I hate to have to explain sombrero-snorts to him.  He never quite gets it.

I also really like how you use a brief moment from the show to describe Jim's voice and how he's acting: "The professional tone is back in his voice, like he’s pitching recycled paper for 1% more."  It's such a subtle and effective description.  Dawesome.

And I see you are no longer begging us not to send you death threats.  Is it because you know we love Jim and Pam sex of any kind?  Is it because you know we love Count Chocula?  Is it because you've finally figured out that you can outrun us, and besides, we like you, we really really like you? (/Sally Field, and now I'm totally dating myself)

Anyway, I really, really look forward to more of this!! 

Reviewer: angie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Why would you write such a story summary, about how it's going to backfire, and how you have the whole story almost done, and then leave it at such a cliff hanger?!  You should update again tonite so that I can concentrate while I'm at work tomorrow.


Author's Response: tomorrow I swear. It's done, thanks for reading. I really really appreciate it.

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

OMG...you MUST update soon. I'm so into this idea -- as deluded as they both are, this should be hysterical and enlightening -- it's kinda scary. 

And I love your descriptions of his voices -- stinkbombing woodshop, get Dwight pregnant behind the middle school -- they make me giggle.

More, please! 



Author's Response: I'm actually super into this idea too (obviously) and I think their cluelessness is hilarious too. Getting Dwight pregnant, sigh, Tina Fey is a comedic genius.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 07:46 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Between those two, of course it would be totally without emotion, yeah....NOT!

The pervball in me says, please continue this ASAP!



Author's Response: the second is already written, but the awkward smut isn't until the third thanks for reading you all rock

Reviewer: inconsume Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 07:43 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

I love this premise. I giggled and snorted the whole way through this chapter and can barely wait for more. One little correction/typo is that "and I now that," is missing a K. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response: fixed! thanks

Reviewer: ayla Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 07:41 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Hee! Love this! And with a 30 Rock joke to boot!


Author's Response: I hope to incorporate some reference to that show in all of my stories in my small way it would be doing something for tina fey and tracy jordon.

Reviewer: LadyLuck Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

nice! update soon


Author's Response: tomorrow! oh and overconfidentjim is in full force in the next one

Reviewer: tizzy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Oh my god, because I'm an involved fan (aka so obbessesd with this show that I have dreams about it) I actually as I was falling asleep had the thought what if Jim and Pam did try to have a casual thing? And then I'm hanging around here (because I'm always here) and here is your fic! So I'm all YAY!

I'm pretty sure this whole situation is going to blow up in their faces...but it should be fun to watch/read!! I'm literally sitting here unable to wait for the next update! hehehe

By the way I'm liking your other stories you have going write now as well...this one was just the most cliffy (is that a word, eh it is now) :-)

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 07:30 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Hee!  Yeah, that will totally backfire on them, but I can't wait to read it.  :)


Author's Response: oh and it will be good, he thinks he's sooooooooo over her right

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

LOL more pleaseeee !!!

Reviewer: Weetzie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 07:01 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Yay! I love this idea!

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 06:55 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Haha, I like what I've read so far.

Reviewer: mess of jess Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 06:50 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

This is such a great premise! Totally different. And who doesn't love Overconfident!thenStupid!thenHot!Jim? I mean, really? That's great. I am totally looking forward to this. :)

Reviewer: kariak Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 06:36 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Oooo.  I like this concept.  I also like that you used the taking someone/thing "being the Middle School and getting" it/him/her pregnant.  I snorted a little when I read it.

Author's Response: I know it's sacriligious to say this here, but I think that 30 Rock just might be funnier than the office now, especially since the office got all drama-rama. It doesn't hurt that I have the world's biggest girl crush on Tina Fey, I tell my husband that I AM the less hot, less sucessful version of her. Lettuce in the hair, check! Brushing your teeth in the wrong bathroom because you're so tired, check! Bi-curious shoes, check!

Reviewer: oypoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 06:31 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Bahaha, this makes me laugh. I think if Jim were to do this, Pam would drop dead. You know Kevin is totally eavesdropping..."Niiiiiiiiice."

Author's Response:

Hey man, If Pam can suddenly have pseudo-sex with Jim while actually screwing Ryan or better yet get molested by Jim in a crowded bar I'm pretty sure she can have casual sex with Jim. I agree though on principle on the dropping dead thing. I just would so love it if they 'hugged it out bitch!' thanks for responding

 

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