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Reviewer: annagirl93 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 10:31 am Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

i just want to say i fucking love this series and i keep checking for updates and i always get excited when you update. keep up the great work!!!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 09:57 am Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

i completely forgot that we've been privy to Jim's thoughts this whole time, but Pam has no idea that he's having a GREAT time! gosh... you're great at sucking us into the story. anyway, it's amazing and i can't wait to see how you show Pam that Jim is oh-so-in-love with her :) 

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 08:39 am Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

You made Jim's feelings for her so vivid in the previous chapters, that until I read this one, it didn't even hit me that she still has no idea. Wow. Poor Pam. He so needs to tell her (and, well if he wants to show her too, I guess I could live with that...) You are really sustaining the tension and heat and emotion here.  Jim is truly the gift that keeps on giving. 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 08:25 am Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

wow -- to take us from hot kitchen sex (he's going to make her beg for it) to Pam's insecurities causing her to totally misread Jim (you seem like you've gotten it all out of your system) all in one chapter -- well done. 

How is it possible to give us such a totally hot & wrenching chapter and leave us half insane to find out what is next?

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 08:19 am Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

Hey this is a great story! I really have been enjoying reading it since chapter 1, and yes. I'd love to know what he's thinking!

Reviewer: Weetzie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 07:28 am Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

Oh, how I wish that The Office were on HBO so that we could actually get an episode like this!! Just fantastic!! I love how insecure Pam is to think he would want to go home to Karen after that. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Well, I suppose I can wait for a little while, but this weekend, please?

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 11:46 pm Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

very very wrong indeed! aww my poor Pammy was crying, Jim make it all better!!

I'm very excited for the epilouge.

(I know I already said it once, but again thanks for making my day) 

Reviewer: Pam Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 11:44 pm Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

Sex, sex, and more sex!  Thank you!  Please let Jim just say those 3 words that Pam has been longing to hear!

Reviewer: slpchic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 11:35 pm Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

UPDATE SOON!!!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 11:28 pm Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

So hot!  Love these two going at it.  Can't wait for the rest.  "Casual" my ass.

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 11:14 pm Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

I must know what Jim is thinking!

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 10:52 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Good God.  I don't even know how to begin to review that.  My computer keys are burning my hands.  I'm excited (and, to be honest, given your angsty ways a little nervous) to see how you wrap this up. 

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 10:46 pm Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

I knew there was a reason I'm still up!  Yay! for another chapter...seriously...hot.  And I knew Jim couldn't be over her...he just couldn't.  This story is amazing.

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 10:41 pm Title: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

Yes, in fact I DO want to know what Jim is thinking.  Your powers of observation are tremendous!  As are your powers of writing the hot sex scenes.  :)

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 10:25 pm Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache

Um...wow...I am so glad I was a little behind on my reading because I don't think I could have lived with the cliffhangers.  This is just hot...love it.

Reviewer: collardgreens Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache

I like how jim's broken brain works too, and yours for that matter. Hurry up with the next chapter.

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 04:03 pm Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache

BOOM!  <-- my head

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 08:58 am Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache

I like the way Jim's broken brain works too!

And, yay, there's no going back now, no pretending this didn't mean anything... ! (hopefully)

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 08:18 am Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache

I just went to the kitchen and got a drink of water and all I got was my pregnat cat rubbing up against my leg!! I didn't find Jim anywhere!!!

Reviewer: lena76 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 06:28 am Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache

Oh my that was so very HOT. I'm feelin' a little frisky at the moment ;) Whoa....Do I need some air!!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 05:55 am Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache

One more chapter? We couldn't persuade you to do, oh say, 16? After all, they seem to have plenty of energy left and Jim's recovery time is nothing if not impressive ;-) 

Get Up Here...Now ...oh, yeah. Take-Charge-Pam/Putty-In-Her-Hands-Jim is a wonderful thing...especially, with the undercurrent of vulnerability on both their parts. Seriously, loved how this was scorchingly hot, yet they were laughing and talking and being playful...in short they were still them.

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 04:08 am Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache

I like the way Jim's broken brain works.

Yes, so do I . =)

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 01:08 am Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache

*Jaw on the floor*

If you keep this up, I won't have any brain left! My, my, my, that was hot.

Reviewer: Pam Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 10:11 pm Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache

I'm anxiously awaiting the last chapter!  I have thoroughly enjoyed everything that you've written so far.  I love that Pam is practically rendering Jim speechless.  It's just incredible!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 10:10 pm Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache

yes, Jim's brain should break and just stay broken. permanently. and i should be pam for a day. what? ^_^

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