10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 10:07 pm Title: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."
Again, another fantastic chapter. Thank you for letting Pam have her jollies too. I loved the line, "He knows that even if he never has sex again, this moment has given him enough masturbation fodder to last a lifetime." Truly priceless!
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 10:02 pm Title: That Was a Great Fight....We Should Do It Again
I have decided that I have to review after every chapter of this incredible story that I read. That gives me a chance to cool down before reading more steamy goodness. Thank you, thank you, thank you! You have written this exactly how I would like to see it play out on tv. Of course, things won't play out this way, but I think that Jim does need to know just how much he has hurt Pam. And, she needs to tell him just how much she loves him.
Date: April 12, 2007 09:56 pm Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache
This is wonderful and I love it. Damn, I wish my husband were home at the moment. I mean, you know, just 'cuz he's a real nice guy and all, not for any other .... reason.
My favorite lines:
“Jim,” she says in the half moan, half sigh way that he now prefers her to say his name all the time.
“Something like that,” he manages, because even a night of incredible sex isn’t going to make him lay it all out like that again. That boy is not confessing first!
“Oh,” she says with a mischievous smile, “Just to the kitchen to get a drink of water.” Oh, yeah.
What a fun, fun story.
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 09:26 pm Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache
ha! so who's the hellcat now???
I'm sad there is only one more chapter.... :( This is one of the few stories I have read several times already as I wait for updates!!
Date: April 12, 2007 09:05 pm Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache
wow, I love this!!!
Date: April 12, 2007 09:04 pm Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache
Hee! I like both Jim's broken brain and your dirty mind that writes him like that. Squee!
Date: April 12, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache
ok, I totally thought that Pam was gonna take him to the office and do it in the kitchen...Angela would NOT be cool with the unsanitary conditions that would result from that encounter...not at all.
Date: April 12, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache
um... wow. Awesome. great. hot. wonderful. Yep I think that describes it. And I think I need some water now too.... haha I'll never think of that in the same way again.
I'm sad there's only one more to go! Lovely job though!
Date: April 12, 2007 08:18 pm Title: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache
Wow. This is so good. It's not just smut; you've got it down to a science. I can't wait to see how this ends (even though I don't want it to)--great work. And I love your chapter titles! --Ch
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 03:08 pm Title: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."
OMG, I am speechless and DYING for more...my goodness girl, I can't see it getting any better if it does MY brain will break AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Date: April 12, 2007 03:01 pm Title: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."
OK, I admit, I was skeptical in the beginning that you wouldn't get me to believe this because I couldn't understand how Jim would think this would be a good idea, or how Pam would go along with it with any dignity (especially after overhearing that conversation with Karen), but as it's gone on, you've done a great job of revealing their mindset and motivations, and I totally buy it. And it's gone to some very nice places...! (assertive, sexy Pam = whoa!) So, yeah, I want more ;)
Date: April 12, 2007 09:09 am Title: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."
Uh, is today tomorrow, or is tomorrow tomorrow? As you can tell, my brain is broken beyond repair.
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 06:26 am Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me
Noooooooooooooooooo!! I know you did not just leave it like that.... :) That was so very HOT....Wow I really should not have read this at work.....I don't think I can wait until tomorrow for an update......Thank god it's Thursday though...Amazing!
Date: April 12, 2007 04:57 am Title: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."
OH my god.
Amazing. "...suddenly, they're in one of his fantasies" -- "this moment has given him enough masturbation fodder to last a lifetime" -- yeah, Jim is in waaaay over his head.
CAN/T WAIT for the next chapter. At this point, I need a cigarette, and we haven't gotten to the actual sex yet!
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 04:13 am Title: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."
i love this ! Great job, I dont think I could do half a good writing this story!
Date: April 12, 2007 12:06 am Title: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."
boo yah! I knew his plab was stupid from the start! I'm sure subconsiously he knew that too...I mean duh, how could sex with Pam not be everything he's wanted and more...
once again, so proud that you are continuing to drag this out...my god i'm impressed
Date: April 11, 2007 11:07 pm Title: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."
One nitpick - schmuck is with an sch. Yiddish.
This chapter is really really wonderful smut. Loved it. I just favorited this story.
One thing that confused me at first is that Jim has on his dress pants and is all buckled up. During the last chapter, Pam had him at least unbuckled and partly out of pants. Maybe he would have buckled all up to go talk to Pam in the bathroom, but starting that way here made me go back and say, wait, where were we? Why are his pants on and belt buckled?
But again, this is just lovely, lovely, and smutty. Niiice. And glad to see that they are nice and compatible in bed as well as in pranks and fun.
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2007 10:54 pm Title: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."
brain still broken. in fact, i think it's a little more broken than yesterday. but i still want more. please? ^_^
Date: April 11, 2007 10:24 pm Title: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."
Yeehaw! Good for them! Yeah, that's totally not gonna get it out of anyone's system. Hee! I love it when naive plans backfire. :)
Date: April 11, 2007 10:07 pm Title: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."
Wow, this is intense.
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2007 09:56 pm Title: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."
Wow. *tilt*
Date: April 11, 2007 06:25 pm Title: That Was a Great Fight....We Should Do It Again
Wow! Between Pam's sarcasm and the hotness (is that a word), I know my brain is broke too. This is so great!
Date: April 11, 2007 04:08 pm Title: That Was a Great Fight....We Should Do It Again
wow this is really good - i like pam saying she doesnt not want to love him ... good stuff - update soon@!!!
Date: April 11, 2007 03:21 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me
Oh my goodness. I love the way you write. You mix humor, smut, drama and your characterizations are so. spot. on.
I look forward to your next chapter. They make me smile.
Date: April 11, 2007 11:08 am Title: That Was a Great Fight....We Should Do It Again
Please continue, I love that Pam has a backbone in this. Very sassy.