Date: March 17, 2007 06:18 am Title: The R.V.
That ending for Chapter 4! So sad!
I can't wait for the next one.
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2006 07:30 pm Title: The R.V.
Oh, man, I hope you post more soon -- so fun. (And intense!)
6 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 09:58 pm Title: The R.V.
Your descriptions are so vivid - "In an oil and water combination, her essence mixed with that of the dead to create a rainbow of red." So sad for Dwight.
9 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 05:20 pm Title: The R.V.
Oh, I am sad now. I love Dwangela!
This story is awesome. I look forward to the next chapter.
7 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 12:48 pm Title: The R.V.
I felt so bad for Dwight (twice). Your characterization of Michael is freaking hilarious! My only request: let Jim and Pam get together. Please, pretty please.
9 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 08:05 am Title: The R.V.
Aw. I feel so bad for Dwight. And damn you for taking away the Jim/Pam action.
I just have to say, after this: "Two weeks ago I made you 'cookies'. And you said they were your favorite. Because this time I used a little bit of...brown sugar."
I literally said 'GROSS' out loud. I don't even want to think about what 'brown sugar' means, but I'm pretty sure that I already do. Yuck.
PS; You're awesome.
9 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 06:14 am Title: The R.V.
This is the oddest fic ever. I mean that as a really big compliment. It's fantastic and weird. Love it!
Author's Response: thanks! it's a reflection of myself.
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 03:37 am Title: The R.V.
HAHA I laughed through most of this. And especially at this:
“Two weeks ago I made you 'cookies'. And you said they were your favorite. Because this time I used a little bit of...brown sugar.”
And then I got to the end, and I felt really bad about laughing so hard earlier.
Author's Response: i'm really happy that you laughed. well...until the end.
i hope you enjoy the rest!
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 01:57 am Title: The R.V.
So, what you're saying is.. you hate Angela enough to kill her twice? NICE. And Jim didn't really get any lovin'? No, really, this is great. It's fun to read a fic and giggle through it.
Author's Response: no no no! i loveeeee angela. i love her so much i put 5 e's in the word love. but ... i don't know. i think i just wanted to show a different side of dwight. i wanted people to see that he is vunerable and weak at times.
and no, jim didn't really get down.
but he will. he will.
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 05:06 am Title: Leaving Scranton.
I don't know which I'm more disturbed by, the Dwight/Angela "flirting" or the fact I knew exactly what you were talking about witch each Harry Potter tidbit.
Author's Response: i'm an underground harry potter fan. but i'm really good at hiding it. thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 05:01 am Title: Outbreak.
The title of this "Scratonian Ranimation" makes me think of Linkin Park's album Reanimation Theory, then it's in my head while I'm trying to read... which is pretty cool for a background soundtrack lol!!
There are so many parts in this chapter where I would laugh my butt off then be all ack! omg! So yay! *reads more*
Author's Response: when you said linkin park, you made me imagine that dwight was in that band. and was singing "crawling in my skin". it was a beautiful picture.
thanks for reading!
Date: July 26, 2006 01:12 am Title: The Warehouse.
LMAO "They're coming!"
Perfect.
Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad you enjoyed ... at least ... that part.
8 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2006 04:03 pm Title: The Warehouse.
“They’re coming!” Dwight yelled as he kicked open the folding door to the bedroom. “Um…Okay, not what I meant."
Ha!
8 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2006 03:27 pm Title: The Warehouse.
I love how this chapter ends! I can just see the look on Dwight's face as he kicks open the door and yells "They're coming". Too, too funny!
Date: July 25, 2006 03:12 pm Title: The Warehouse.
Hot, "threatened by zombies" sex! Wheeee!!
Author's Response: or IS it?
10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2006 01:29 pm Title: Leaving Scranton.
They want us to go to the bakery, eat their food, and then take us to their base, where they will eat us and all the pastry delights in our intestines.
HA! and Ewwwwwww!
Funny and cool... really enjoying it.
8 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2006 03:54 am Title: Outbreak.
"He shot him.
Ryan was dead.
Roy was dead."
I don't know why that made me laugh from my toes, because I like Ryan and I don't hate Roy, but I did.
7 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 10:47 pm Title: Leaving Scranton.
Ridiculous, but so hilarious. I love that Dwight is in his element as a zombie killer. Interested to see how you conclude this.
8 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 10:31 pm Title: Leaving Scranton.
Loved the Harry Potter stuff. The more you write this the better I'm liking it! This actually had me laughing out loud.
Date: July 24, 2006 09:49 pm Title: Leaving Scranton.
Yak-Bak!!! YES. Love this story.
Date: July 24, 2006 09:41 pm Title: Outbreak.
After reading the other reviews, I just wanted to add that I, too, enjoyed the short sentences in this fic: they added to the dramatic, suspenseful, action-movie feel, and made me feel more as if I were in the situation with the D-M-ites. I think they also work well within the context of a zombie fic because the plot is so full of surprises.
I also wanted to add that I like how you showed that a crisis can emphasize a person's personality (not change it- witness Dwight, Michael, etc.).
Author's Response: i'm glad you enjoy the way i write. i was pretty much watching 28 days later, in which they don't include a LOT of dialogue, and if they do, it's something REALLY intense, like: "look."
thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
9 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 09:31 pm Title: Leaving Scranton.
So creative- I can't wait to see what happens next (hopefully a little JAM lovin'). My favorite line so far:
"Dwight looked back. He didn’t smile. But the gleam in his eyes revealed that this was what he has been waiting for his entire life." Totally.
8 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 07:33 pm Title: Leaving Scranton.
"They want us to go to the bakery, eat their food, and then take us to their base, where they will eat us and all the pastry delights in our intestines.”
I did an honest-to-god spit-take at this. Seriously. Water everywhere.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And turning into a human geiser.
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 05:21 pm Title: Leaving Scranton.
Ok, this story is seriously funny. A bit weird, a bit zany, and all fun!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed it and I hope you keep reading!
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 09:39 am Title: Outbreak.
Loved this line - "And I have everything we need…waterproof matches, iodine tablets, beet seeds, protein bars".
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Obviously, Dwight always has those things ready. In his purse.