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Reviewer: SkeetShruting Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2008 10:15 pm Title: Finally

Awesome...Awesome!!

Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2008 08:15 pm Title: Going to the Chapel and We're Gonna Get Married

I'm glad you gave Jane her due. She deserved it!

Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2008 07:54 pm Title: Movie Night

I loved this exchange between Jane and Jim:
“Call me tomorrow and tell me if it was a date.”



“What if I still don’t know?”



“Then you did it wrong.”



“Ha, ha, very funny.”

Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2008 07:41 pm Title: That's What Friends Do

So sweet! Obviously I like where you've got them going...

Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2008 07:31 pm Title: I Just Had the Most Amazing Non-Date

I love Jane's threat to call Pam! Hilarious!

Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2008 07:11 pm Title: Don't Blame Me, Blame the Alcohol!

Ha! I see from your post chapter comment that you were trying to follow the show's storyline! Now I am curious to see what you do. I like how you've got Jane prodding Jim. Somebody has to!

Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2008 07:06 pm Title: Roy did What? What did Pam Say?

Cheese fries! You made me want cheese fries! Anything but talking about Pam not (?) wanting Jim. You got his attitude spot on from the ep and the next one if I remember correctly!

Reviewer: shootingstars Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2008 09:37 am Title: Going to the Chapel and We're Gonna Get Married

This was wonderful. I found it through the March Member's Choice list and shot through the whole thing in one sitting while I was really supposed to be working.
This was a lovely read, I don't often take of OCs but Jane was great - half the voice of the audience, telling Jim what we wanted to tell him, and yet a rounded character in her own right. I love that Pam and Jim just sort of came together, I don't think I've ever read a fic where there wasn't some sort of dramatic moment of revelation so I really liked the unique take of having them just work their way back to each other. Thanks for a great read :)

Reviewer: Feedingmyaddiction Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2008 07:11 pm Title: Table for Four

I am so late to this story, but the McFadden/McFayden part had me cracking up. The dog thinks I've lost it.

 Also, loved the "We push for sport." too funny!

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2007 10:00 pm Title: Going to the Chapel and We're Gonna Get Married

Awww they're married!!!  I could have kicked Jane for the 'second thoughts' bit, but the rest of her was great

 

classic toast by Michael and Dwight I would love for them both do give toasts at the wedding when it happens on the show (which it must)

 

Great story sad to see it end 



Author's Response: Hey JR, thanks for the review and I'm sorry to be so tardy in responding to you.  Thank you for following my fics and reviewing, it means alot to me.   And I'm glad you enjoyed this one, it is still my favorite.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2007 08:52 pm Title: Going to the Chapel and We're Gonna Get Married

Aw, I loved the way you wrapped this up! Great job!

Author's Response: Sorry to take so long to respond....I'm usually better about that.  Thanks for the review Jenn....and I'm really glad you enjoyed the ending.   Thanks for sticking with me until the end. 

Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Roy did What? What did Pam Say?

Loved it. It was perfect. I especially liked the dialogue. It all seemed very natural and fitting for who the characters were. And I loved Jane. I want her to be my best friend. :)

Reviewer: GreenDress Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2007 07:23 pm Title: Going to the Chapel and We're Gonna Get Married

So sweet!  Please do a sequel where they all have babies!

Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond....how rude of me....A sequel could definitely be fun.  I do love Jane.....hmmmm.....puts on thinking cap.  Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked this fic.

Reviewer: malcolm lake Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Going to the Chapel and We're Gonna Get Married

Very fitting end to a terrific story!  Thanks for writing it!

Author's Response: I'm sorry I didn't respond timely....thanks for the review malcolm....any chance we'll see more from you soon?

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2007 05:38 pm Title: Going to the Chapel and We're Gonna Get Married

YAY!  Any fic that wraps up with a JAM wedding is great in my book -- but yours was quite sweet.  Thank goodness Jim & Pam got a freaking clue this season without a Jane in their lives.

Loved this: “Wouldn’t you cry if you worked there?”
“Absolutely.”  
So true!

Nicely done, uncgirl -- see you in S4! 



Author's Response: I didn't realize I hadn't responded to all the reviews here....so sorry.  Thanks as always for reading a reviewing, I am always excited to see that you liked something I wrote.  Hope you're enjoying S4 and hope we get more eps soon.

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Going to the Chapel and We're Gonna Get Married

YAY!!!! ::applause::  we all already know what I think of tihs amazing story, so I'll just leave it at that ;-)

Author's Response: *takes bow*  "Thank you, thank you!"  I'm really glad loon went out of town because I got a chance to get to know you....thanks for your help!  And here's hoping we see more from you soon....

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2007 02:37 pm Title: Going to the Chapel and We're Gonna Get Married

Ooh, I feel special! You totally are worth a million bucks. Probably more. Just FYI. And I hope you write more stories... cause um, yep. Season four is just around the corner... :)

I am SO not like Jane with her love of weddings. Weddings... so not worth it in my book.

She married Mark. Okay, and honestly, seriously, tears in my eyes at dancing with her father. Makes me sad :(.

And Jim and Pam are getting married. That makes me happy. :)

Its so sweet Jane and Pam! My heart is very full... hehe

JANE! That is so not cool! Like Pam could really ever have second thoughts, but still!

"I know, what about that? " I can so see Jim saying that.

This is just... its HAPPY

So at the last wedding I went to - nearly a year ago now cause it was Sept 23rd last year .... (hmm, maybe I should call and say happy anniversary or something) - anyways, the cake wasn't smashed into face that I remember, but it did still fall onto the white white brides dress. Yeah that was an adventure to get out. Thankfully, it was removed and no stain.

Dwight and Jim making a toast... no good can come of this.

"“Wouldn’t you cry if you worked there?”/“Absolutely.”" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Wow, Dwight and Michael... I am shaking my head in disbelief. Those two.

And meddling Jane. Toby does need a girl.... do I sense sequel haha.

This was such an awesome story yay! 



Author's Response:

I love your reviews, they are always so much fun.  I'm glad that you enjoyed it and that it made you happy!  It made me happy to write it.  And yes, season 4 is coming.  And I'm happy and nervous and excited!  So, anyway, yes it was long 5 months, and I guess I'm relieved it's done.  But I'll miss Jane.

And I meant it Em, thanks for the times that you have encouraged me.  I often need it and I appreciate it.  You're pretty great yourself you know? ;-)

 

Reviewer: Ayswen Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2007 03:18 pm Title: Table for Four

Im so thrilled that youre updating this again. i had it bookmarked and id just go back and check every once in a while and i just came back to 2 chapters. YAY! and I love this story! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Ayswen,  I'm sorry I made you wait.  But I'm glad you were patient with me.  And I am so happy you liked it!  YAY back at you.

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 05:54 am Title: Table for Four

Woonderful stuff that is as much fun to read the fifth time as the first.  This is vintage uncgirl...sweet Jim and Pam goodness with some humor and a nifty original character thrown in to give it some extra zip.  Great work. 

Author's Response: Thanks Loon!  Just,  awwww shucks.  Thanks for your help and encouragement.

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 10:14 pm Title: Table for Four

Fictional characters or not, I love them all!  Jane and Mark seem like the best friends everyone wants t have and it's lovely.

Banter and fluffy Jim/Pam moments are always great and you knocked this one out of the park ;)  Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you WBJ!  I had a lot of fun with this one and I hope it showed.  I really appreciate that you took the time to review and I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it.  And yes, don't you just want to go out with Mark and Jane and Jim and Pam?  I know I do.

 

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 10:03 pm Title: Table for Four

I just love Jane!  Great character you've created.  This is such a wonderful, fluffy story!  Post another chapter SOON, please!

Author's Response: VB, thank you for this review, and I'm sorry it took me so long to respond and to post.  But I hope that you like the last bit here, and I really appreciate your kind words.  I'm happy you like Jane, I think she's pretty fun too and she's really my first original character - so I'm glad she turned out.  :-)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 08:17 pm Title: Table for Four

My thoughts?  Firth of course. ;)  I adore Jane.  Have I told you that lately?

Yay you for finally posting!!!  Not fair to keep such things all to yourself. :)



Author's Response: As always, thanks for helping and encouraging.  and duh, of course Firth, but MacFadyen brings the longing glances.  

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Table for Four

OMG, Kirk Herbstreit is my imaginary football boyfriend!!!  How can I love Jane any more?!?!

One good thing about the delay between posting chapters -- I got to reread the whole thing.  Second drink!! 



Author's Response: Wow, thanks Lisa!  I appreciate it very much.  Kirk is just another reason to be happy football season is beginning.  :-)

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 07:56 pm Title: Table for Four

ugh YES.  SOOOOOOO great! I love the end!!!!! ::sigh:: "you're just...everything...you know?" ugh, puddle. that's all.  wow.  well done, uncgirl.  well well done.

Author's Response: Thanks for helping me with this, you really did make it better.  I know, right?  Kinda goes along with some choice phrases from Jim and Pam in a certain fic called scrabble.......and I owed you a puddle.  I couldn't think after your last chapter.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Table for Four

You updated! Wait, I already knew you were....
Anyways, you ruined my plans (in the best way possible) of getting to sleep early.

Wow, even that first paragraph makes me giddy. I think partially because I am still on a high from the new (eh... spoilery) video that was released. but still. giddy.

I need a guy.... (a jim preferably), but its so sweet he just needed to kiss her. aww.

Poor Pam, so insecure...

Okay, so no one ever said my bain wasn't weird. I was enjoying the Pam/Jane conversation and I go 'crap, i have to feed my fish.' So I fed the little fellow.

But I love how great Pam and Jane are together, it really is good. I like seeing Pam interacting with others outside the office, and feeling at ease with Jane is great.

Dude, so I can totally picture them just sitting there on the stoop and it is so romantic, and its just... gah, so sweet.
Now here is the point of the review where I go I so need a boyfriend.

Write faster next time woman!

Author's Response: Thank you thank you!  I have chapter 12 (sigh the last chapter) already almost done.  So I promise it won't take so long this time.  Sorry to ruin your early bed time, but thanks for reading as always.  You know your reviews rock!  And really thanks so much for all the encouragement.  Hope the beginning of school gets better, and that you find a boyfriend who will sit on a stoop with you.

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