Date: May 09, 2009 06:35 pm Title: I'm Not Crazy
"You can’t be in love with her because your heart is broken, Jim. A broken heart cannot fall for anyone but the original person from which the heart was originally broken… about?"
I loved that part. And I love Clarence. And I think I'm really going to love the next chapter...
Date: April 18, 2007 09:58 am Title: Sophie's Choice
I love that Jim is a screamer! Haha. That would be freaky though. Clarence needs like a cow bell or something to announce his arrival better.
Oh yeah Jim... really, could you not know who you would be proposing two. Clarence, the show would be a lot fluffier if you hadn't slipped up. So you are to blame for all the angst this season!
:). Okay. Clarence, you may have some bad things since you slipped up, but you are forcing Jim to do the right things now, so, I guess I forgive you
Date: April 16, 2007 07:32 pm Title: Sophie's Choice
I love it! And thanks for the explanation in the review of why Karen took it so well. (If I had only waited for this chapter, all was explained!) Silly Clarence, taking a vacation just when things would have gotten good!
Your choice when to put the rest up; I will read it when it's there.
Date: April 15, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Well, that was easy
Wow...Jim and/or Pam definitely needs a kick in the pants and I love that it's going to be Jim's guardian angel that does it. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Oh yes, Clarence is a pants kicker. Ha, does tha tmakes sense? It sounded weird. Anyway thanks for reading!
Date: April 13, 2007 07:33 pm Title: Well, that was easy
I'm not sure I believe that Karen would be somewhat happy about breaking up. If that were the case, why would she: a) put in for 2 transfers; b) say she'd redact both transfers; and c) talk about a long distance relationship?
That said? Anything that gets the two of them broken up, I'm happy with!
Oh, but boo for no Clarence in this chapter. I really like Clarence. Does he have his wings yet in your story? And please tell me that Jim will at some point lasso the moon for Pam. Although he may want to come up with a different thing to do - lasso the moon is corny, and has "been done", right? Now I'm going to be thinking about another kind of thing to say you'll do that conveys the same feeling. Darn it!
Anyway, when the next chapter is up, I'll be there.
Author's Response: I hope you read this latest chapter beause it explains it a bit more. The fact that it seemed so unrealiztic was done on purpose to show how much control the angels can have. Anyway, I'm glad you are still liking it!
Date: April 13, 2007 02:37 pm Title: Well, that was easy
Encouraging words huh? Like: Woo-hoo Karen's gone, Jim and Pam can get together, the universe will align and all will be right with my world! So...did it work? Cuz I can't wait for more!
Let me know if you need beta help, I have no life so I should be around all weekend.
Author's Response: I plan on writting again tomorrow, I'll definetly send it your way.