Date: April 13, 2007 12:50 pm Title: Well, that was easy
Good for Jim to try to make things right. The conversation seemed a little rushed, but I really like how you inclulded Jim's thoughts. Looking forward to more of this story!!!
Author's Response: The rush actually is on purpose. It will be explained in the next chapter. Let's just say Clarence has a hand in a lot of things that Jim does and things that happen to him.
Date: April 13, 2007 12:22 pm Title: Well, that was easy
write faster. i just got into this story, and (yay an update so quickly), and I don't want a break.
i love reasonable karen. i also love angry karen. actually, i love any karen when she ends it with jim and jim and pam can be happy. :)
Author's Response: I love that you read this as soon as I posted almost as much as you love that I posted fast. Did that make sense? Anyway.... I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. Hopefully I wont keep you waiting too long.
Date: April 13, 2007 09:45 am Title: I'm Not Crazy
its not REALLY an anniversary... I mean, an anniversary is just a yearly occasion. And six months is not a year. That would be a monthversiary? mesary? I dunno. (but with Pam, he can have one night-sairies, one week, two weeks, every -versairy he wants to have. With PAM)
I want more! :)
Date: April 13, 2007 09:42 am Title: Belief and Chips
Do you realize that showing up in a moving vehicle unannounced isn’t a very good idea?” - wow, that is just so funny!!!
And I used to LOVE sour cream and onion. But I haven't had them in forever, because I switched to Ruffles. But they are tasty.
Date: April 13, 2007 09:29 am Title: Hi, Clarence
Dude, this is making want to watch It's A Wonderful Life... think my mom would be weirded out if I want to watch a Christmas movie in April - and a Christmas movie that I don't normally enjoy?
And, okay, um, this is too MY gaurdian angel - if you could introduce me to my soulmate. Maybe a giant big sign over his head, cause I don't really get the whole subtle things that well. That would be great.
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2007 10:38 pm Title: I'm Not Crazy
MORE!!!!
hehe.. Love this. Love Jim talking to himself. And Clarence makes me laugh. ^______^
Date: April 11, 2007 08:28 pm Title: I'm Not Crazy
Karen's a scab! A couple of Webster's definitions of scab which may be appropriate:
3 a : a contemptible person; b (3) : a worker who accepts employment or replaces a union worker during a strike
Yeah, those fit.
I love the kind of information Clarence is giving Jim. Must be nice to have "connections". And anyone who would put in for a transfer for a significant other without talking to them would deserve an immediate dumping, regardless of timing! Yikes!
I await more (patiently).
Date: April 11, 2007 08:08 pm Title: I'm Not Crazy
heeheehee! I know what's going to happen! Sorry, I'm just really enjoying the perks of beta-ing right now.
But I really like this chapter, so keep up the good work!
Date: April 11, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Belief and Chips
Oh! Wonderful! (French Onion? Obviously.)
I like how Pam almost skipped back to her desk. A little call-back to the Jinx game of Drug Testing? Niice.
Date: April 11, 2007 07:24 pm Title: I'm Not Crazy
OMG!!! Karen did not put in a transfer for Jim!!!!! Does she think she owns him or something?!?!?! *deep breathe* I'm OK!!! This is good!!!!
Author's Response:
I know, I can't let Karen get off too easty.
Thanks for reading!
Date: April 11, 2007 05:31 pm Title: Belief and Chips
This is so cool!!!! I like this a lot!!!
Date: April 11, 2007 02:44 pm Title: Belief and Chips
Really fun! Can't wait to see how it unfolds!
Author's Response: I hope it unfolds to everyones liking. Maybe there will be some twists... dun dun dun
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2007 01:32 pm Title: Belief and Chips
Haha I love additions! And Jim's thoughts are hilarious. I'm beta'ing the next stuff right now, BTW :)
Author's Response: ha, Oh boy. Betafight!
Date: April 11, 2007 01:19 pm Title: Belief and Chips
Hahaha! I actually chuckled out loud at the end. This is such a fun concept! And hey, if it leads to Jam, count me in!
Author's Response: I definetly taste some Jam, no worries!
Date: April 11, 2007 08:16 am Title: Guardian Angel Duet
Um, yes, the people want more. And not just stuffed shells, either. Love the God humor. Don't swear to God, he doesn't like it. Hee!!
Author's Response: Aww, so you mean this big dish of stuffed shells wont be good enough?
Date: April 11, 2007 08:11 am Title: Hi, Clarence
Love love LOVE this concept! Yes to soulmates! Yes to guardian angels! Yay!
Date: April 11, 2007 07:35 am Title: Guardian Angel Duet
I want more! This is great fun.
Date: April 11, 2007 07:32 am Title: Hi, Clarence
It's a Wonderful Chapter!
Your Clarence voice seems so good to me. I love the stuff about the soulmates. I'm going to go check out that next chapter...
Author's Response: That first line made me giggle. Thanks so much! Also I too, am a soulmate for suckers.
Date: April 11, 2007 04:46 am Title: Guardian Angel Duet
Adorable. Really, really fantastic start. Can't wait to see what's next!!
Author's Response: I've have a lot more written, so hopefully you guys will see what's next before the day is over!
Date: April 11, 2007 04:41 am Title: Guardian Angel Duet
What a neat premise! I can't wait to see more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought was neat too, but it's alwaya nice to know that others feel the same!
Date: April 10, 2007 11:58 pm Title: Hi, Clarence
Leaving you a proper review before heading off to bed...
I really like how this is turning out! Can't wait to see the rest. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2007 11:41 pm Title: Guardian Angel Duet
JamGirl, I think that this is a really cute, quirky story idea and I can't wait to read more. :) If you ever need a beta, let me know.
Author's Response: Thanks for the offer and thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you guys are liking it!
Date: April 10, 2007 11:40 pm Title: Hi, Clarence
It's A Wonderful Life is one of my favorite movies of all time...I am very excited to see where you will take this
Author's Response: It may be a little different with the plot, but Jim will definetly realize his mistakes. Thanks for reading.
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2007 11:24 pm Title: Guardian Angel Duet
James Michael Halpert. *snickers* and how like a boy to try jumping over the coffee table... silly jim. MORE!!!
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2007 11:20 pm Title: Hi, Clarence
oh my goodness, i'm LOVING this! probably because i personally believe in the whole "God made this person to be with this person" thing, but even outside of that, i LOVE the idea you've set here! now back to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: That's why I thought of it. I was actually listening to Hey Jude in the shower (that's where the title is from) and it all just escaladed from there. I'm so glad you like it.