10 [Report This]Date: January 14, 2007 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
I realized I didn't comment on this story the first time I read it. I love this story! Really sweet.
9 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2006 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
I remember reading it when you first posted it, and it is still so lovely. I agree that an open ending is good. Maybe it works, maybe it doesn't, but at least they've given it a shot!
9 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2006 09:01 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, how sweet. You capture how time changes things, but how people rarely change much in the core things. Beautiful.
9 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
I loved this story since the first time I read it. You did such a beautiful job of capturing the pain they experienced from each other. And, of course, the best part is the promise of a hopeful ending.
9 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
I loved this story the first time I read it- it's still just as great now. You nailed their characters, and the awkwardness of reuniting after a long separation. And, of course, the end was sweet and adorable.
7 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very sweet story. I was especially glad to see it was set in my (almost) backyard!
Date: July 24, 2006 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was beautiful. it was perfectly written and you captured their characters so well.
9 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
(Pam asks if he's seeing someone) “No,” he answered honestly, though he couldn’t be sure he wouldn’t have lied if he had to. - to me, that one line represented all the potential between Jim and Pam. For him, she'll just always be there, in his head.
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love this story every time I read it! Nicely done!