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Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2007 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1

“Like in Harry Potter? I though Toby took the wand…”

Hehe! Of *course* Dwight would have a wand. Great start.



Author's Response:

:D Thanks!

Dwight works on his magical powers while brushing his teeth (multitasking is a coveted Schrute skill-of course

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2007 07:21 am Title: Chapter 3

Hee!  It seems kind of abrupt at the end there, but still cute.  I love Dwight's involvement in getting Pam and Jim together.  Always knew Schrutes had higher-than-normal matchmaking skills.  ;)

Author's Response:

Of course, Dwight does seem to have the healthiest relationship in the office (marriages notwithstanding...)

thanks, this actually ended out trailing quite a bit longer than I thought it would... 

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2007 05:57 am Title: Chapter 3

I think this story turned out really cute.  Dwight cracks me up and the things he says, oh my ... thanks for letting me beta it!  I forgot how funny it was until I read it again.   

(ps:  I think you forgot a parenthesis at the end!)



Author's Response:

thanks for helping me out :P

oops darn typing skills! 

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is so silly and fun.  Great title.  And, of course, Dwight is entertaining to no end.  Loving it!


Author's Response:

:D thanks

As far as I'm concerned, Dwight is the best guy to write, ever!

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

LOL. This is so funny, and soooo Dwight. Good job capturing thier voices =)

Author's Response:

THnaks you so much- glad you're liking it!

 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 08:21 am Title: Chapter 2

Dwight comparing himself with the Jedi... sad, but true.
And that dance is oddly scary.
Go Pam... dance your way into Jim's heart.


Author's Response:

:D Dwight + alcohol + musci = insanity

thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 06:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Haha! I love the little bit about how elevator safety lecture is worse than wha the has planned!
And of course, Dwight wants her to swear and oath. And she says No. Reminds me of Drug testing, where Dwight is like the hard way or the easy way, and Ryan (whoa, almost typed BJ there), is like,yeah lets do it the hard way.
Aww, this ended too quickly. Right faster. Because I want more :). Such a good start. I love people who can write Dwight so well!

Author's Response:

Hee thanks so much- I adore writing Dwight!

more is coming, soon as I can- plus I got internet back so yay! 

Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 09:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice. Please continue.

 Um, just one thing: Dwight has a TransAm, not a fire bird. I'm really sad that I know that...



Author's Response:

yeah I heard in some phone message he offered to sell his kick-ass firebird so I wasn't sure

 Glad you are enjoying it...

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1

I really like where this is going.   You have Dwight down perfectly.  I can actually picture Pam's reaction to this comment:

 Dwight sighed. "Fine. First of all you must attract your suitor. Clearly you will need some assistance."

I'm really looking forward to more of this!   

 

 



Author's Response:

poor clueless Dwight, I half want FNB to beat him up at the Dojo, but I'm already done the second part so...

glad you're liking it! 

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 08:58 am Title: Chapter 1

This has the potential for extreme amusement and awesomeness :) Can't wait for more!


Author's Response: soon I promise...

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 08:17 am Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this and look forward to more. 

My favorite parts were Jim having "virtually no scavenging skills or defensive training" and "I have heard that you were a great comfort to a woman in this office recently".  I wonder if Dwight is talking about Angela, from Accounting.

Hopefully, you're now inspired to write more! 



Author's Response: Hee!  Trust me, more is on it's way...

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow, I am very excited to see how this goes.  I really like the idea of Angela and Dwight helping Pam out.  You know, if Pam had actually taken that kitten Angela offered.

Author's Response: Yes, I totally wanted her to take the kitten.  Hope you enjoy the next chapter (internet is down on my computer so it might be awhile )

Reviewer: WhitestSneakers Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1

This was hysterical!! i can't wait for the next chapter. your characters were so spot on, i especially loved the harry potter reference, that had me laughing out loud :)

Author's Response: Thanks-glad you are enjoying it

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1

Dwight is a hero, even if he isn't flying around with a cape.  I can't wait to see him "instructing" her at the dojo.  Fear the purple belt!

Looking foward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

he is a hero. 

glad you're enjoying it! 

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 07:04 am Title: Chapter 1

This is sooo funny! I'm loving this! Dwight = amazing.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 04:47 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a very promising beginning! I will be eagerly waiting for the hijinx to ensue.

Author's Response:

thanks

I am up to my neck in stuff for a while so it might be a while but I'm almost done... 

Reviewer: hoosabrat Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 02:53 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG, Dwight is so hilarious.  I love it!


Author's Response:

thanks you!

 

Reviewer: madeinsecret Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is an AWEsome idea.

"even though your choice has virtually no scavenging skills or defensive training" sounds EXACTLY like something Dwight would say.  HEE.



Author's Response:

thanks Swedge but I enjoyed writing it...

thanks for reviewing 

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh God, Dwight.  I love Dwight.  This promises to be very entertaining.


Author's Response: :D thanks

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

What can I say, I love Dwight!  He cracks my s*** up -- and you have him down really well!  (And I love both 'The Injury' and 'Back from Vacation' with their sweet Pam/Dwight moments!!  Looking forward to more....

Author's Response:

:P Thanks!

I love Dwight too! 

Reviewer: Pamela Beesley Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

This concept completely took me by surprise.  Love it, can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thank swedge for the prompt but I'll take credit!

Thanks so much 

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