7 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2007 08:12 pm Title: Karen
This is my favorite so far. How sweet and thoughtful that Jim is getting colored pencils for Pam. And I love that Karen said she had a girlfriend - too funny! I can't wait to see who the last person is.
Date: April 24, 2007 10:39 am Title: Karen
Hee. Still cute! I'm not sure what Jim's pleading look to Karen means, though...
Author's Response: Thanks! And yeah, the pleading look used to have more with it, but the girl who does my beta-ing suggested that I leave it more open. So I did.
Date: April 23, 2007 08:23 pm Title: Karen
Haaaaaa ha ha ha ha! Okay, you rock at giving Karen her due comedy cred. That was so awesome of her.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I always feel a little bad for Karen. Besides I think she has a pretty decent sense of humor. I could so see her doing something like that, especially after her "prank" in Cocktails.
Date: April 23, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Karen
Karen, the Staples manager. What a thing to imagine.
Michael said he could imagine Angela with another woman. Maybe now, he's imagining her with Karen...!
I like that Karen and Jim are managing to be friendly.
Author's Response: I've noticed that with this story all the relationships are much friendlier. I like the idea of it I guess. I haven't imagined who Michael was imagining Karen with, but it'd be hilarious if it was Angela. Thanks for reading.
Date: April 20, 2007 10:37 am Title: Roy
confonscate your number. haha
I like this slight AU. And Michael.... hehe.
Author's Response: I swear I've had a deli lady (although at Jewel, not Walmart) take my number before because I couldn't make up my mind.
Date: April 20, 2007 10:35 am Title: Kelly
Uh, Kelly. I am in bed by eleven. partly because I am that pathetic, but msotly because I am up by 7. and I like sleep.
That is Kelly. Scary Kelly. Although, I can be like Kelly, so I should be as scared of her as I am.
Author's Response: I'm in bed by ten. (Mostly because of my baby.) But I have a friend who can't imagine going to bed before 1. She reminds me of Kelly, and that is scary.
Date: April 18, 2007 10:21 pm Title: Roy
Did Roy just advise Jim to perform oral sex on Pam? Haaaaaaaaaaa! That's just awesome.
And I love this: “Old ladies are my specialty, Halpert."
You made Roy really likable in this. Nice.
Author's Response: Somehow when Roy isn't Pam's boyfriend, I can picture him as likable. I just loved writing the awkwardness of this chapter.
Date: April 18, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Dwight
i like this story...mainly b/c i live in chicago. and we don't have super wal-mart or meijer, which everyone knows are the greatest stores ever.
Author's Response: I live about 60 miles west of Chicago! And Super Walmart is not so much fun, trust me. Ours is very dirty and gross.
Date: April 18, 2007 12:39 pm Title: Roy
Was Roy going to tell Jim something Pam would like in bed? Cringe! Awkward! Awkward!
Author's Response: Hee...the thought of Roy trying to tell Jim anything about what Pam likes and Jim having to respond just cracks me up. Especially after all they've been through. Thanks for reading!
Date: April 17, 2007 08:55 pm Title: Kelly
You know, I find it awkward to run into people from work at Walmart, too, and the people I work with are reasonably normal. I can't imagine bumping into Kelly! Hee.
Author's Response: The thought of bumping into Kelly gives me a headache! Especially at 11 o'clock at night.
Date: April 17, 2007 06:45 pm Title: Kelly
I wonder who he'll see next time he tries to get that game! Or what he'll be shopping for next.
Anyway, I'm enjoying this.
Author's Response: I'm sorry it has taken me so long to respond. I'm so glad you are enjoying this! It means a lot to me.
Date: April 17, 2007 06:32 pm Title: Kelly
Ha, poor long-suffering Jim. I think the characterization in these two chapters is really good, and that's definitely the thing I appreciate most in fanfic. So yeah, great work. I'm looking forward to seeing his other run-ins. Keep it up, hey?
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: April 17, 2007 11:47 am Title: Dwight
ha! Funny :) Looking forward to the other four times!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: April 17, 2007 11:24 am Title: Dwight
Duct Tape is very important. And I do know people who have made clothes out of it. And I have never used it in any kinky way.
This seems like it will be very silly, so I want the other 4 times.
And, I don't really ever go to SuperWalmart, but I may have to find one to go to!
Author's Response: I knew a girl who held her favorite pair of shoes together all through college with duct tape (red). And I hate Super Walmart but honestly it's the best place (read cheapest) to go for groceries.
Date: April 17, 2007 10:28 am Title: Dwight
Ooh, I like that we'll have 4 more chapters!
This is fun. I love how Jim realizes that he'd better tell Dwight not to use duct tape. He knows Dwight thinks Jim was serious and there's some really sexy duct tape thing. There... isn't, is there? (Scurries off - "Honey, where's the duct tape? What color goes best with us?")
Author's Response: Hee...I don't think there's anything actually sexy about duct tape. I'll have to ask my husband. :)
Date: April 16, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Dwight
I can't wait to read more of this! I'm always running into people at Super Wal-Mart. . . I think Super Wal-Mart is a universal breeding ground for hilarity. Keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I run into someone every time I step into that store. New stuff will be up soon.
Date: April 16, 2007 07:53 pm Title: Dwight
OMG, that was hysterical! I love it. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! New stuff will be up soon. :)