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Reviewer: Emilys List Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2007 07:38 pm Title: I will live inside the shadow that I cast for you

Wow. This is really depressing! But I think it's a great example of how dark Jim can be. The last line is phenomenal.

Reviewer: Token Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2007 09:17 pm Title: I will live inside the shadow that I cast for you

Wonderfully heartbreaking... the dark side of Jim is captivating!

Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2007 06:30 pm Title: I will live inside the shadow that I cast for you

WOW. Very interesting and original idea, and powerfully written.

Reviewer: neptune1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 12:38 pm Title: I will live inside the shadow that I cast for you

This is a little heartbreaking, but I like it.  You've done a nice job capturing utter despair and a feeling of almost no self-worth.  Poor Jim.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 10:03 am Title: I will live inside the shadow that I cast for you

Wow.  Dark but very good.

Reviewer: littlepleasures Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 12:31 am Title: I will live inside the shadow that I cast for you

I love dark Jim.  This was perfect.  And the end, where he just sits crying, and then in the morning remembers Pam doesn't love him...just perfectly heartbreaking.

And you are beyond awesome for using Something Corporate lyrics in this!

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 11:25 pm Title: I will live inside the shadow that I cast for you

Ouch! Very dark, but I really liked it!

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