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Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2007 06:56 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

Excuse my language, but that would be a fucking hot baby.

Hehe! Yes, it would. Another great fic- you're single-handedly turning me into a Ryan/Kelly fan.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2007 11:17 am Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

That was a wonderful Ryan/Katy fic on LJ.  I think I'm so intrigued by Katy because she's the last person Jim was "getting some" from and yet she was no threat to Pam.  So, win/win (/win, because she was probably enjoying it as well; otherwise she wouldn't put up with the not calling, then calling...).

I tried to comment on your latest video (Ryan/Kelly) over on YouTube, but had trouble, so I don't think it "took".  It was great! 

 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 06:11 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

Absolutely adorable. Adorable!

Author's Response: Thank you thank you!!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 11:23 am Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

OK, I'm a little incoherent over here, because this was just the cutest thing ever. Oh, that is totally going to be them in a couple of years!!! Yay!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it :)  Those two + babies = adorable amounts of dysfunction. 

Reviewer: nightskiesfading Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 06:16 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

Ah I love this, they were written perfectly! I've really grown to love Ryan/Kelly this season, and really enjoyed this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Ah, Ryan and Kelly, you gotta love em :)

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 05:23 am Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

This was delightful - you've really captured that Ryan/Kelly thing, which is actually not  easy to do well. So often Kelly just sounds like slapstick caricature in stories, but I really heard her voice here - and got a sense of why Ryan is drawn to her. Really a fun read too.

Author's Response: I always worry about going overboard with Kelly so thank you so much for saying that about hearing her voice.  Thanks!! :) 

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 10:02 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

Dude, you write Kelly and Ryan better than anyone. You captured their love/hate/indifference/smothering relationship so perfectly. Nice job.

Author's Response: What an awesome compliment!  Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 03:17 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

That was such a good story.  They're funny in how they exasperate each other so. 

It was so nice to see Kelly would charm Ryan's family.  And it made me laugh so much that she knows a baby would Ryan would be hot.  By the way, I could hear it in my head when Kelly says, "Ry-an!"  Hee.  The last line was just great.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Oh man, I couldn't believe that you gave me a blue ribbon on a non Jim/Pam story, that was too cool for words :) :) :)

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 01:06 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

There were so many funny bits all the way through this.  I don't know how you do it.

Our kids are going to hate us no matter what.  So very true.  Take that prospective parents!

I just wish you wouldn’t bring up babies while we’re having sex My brother's wife has been talking about babies an awful lot recently.  Pretty much every other sentence for the past week.  He's scared.

And the short jokes and Kelly getting Ryan a chair so he can reach the top cabinet and his family maybe being a little worried that he was gay!  Just too good.



Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you found it funny, I could watch those two bicker all day.  They should have a whole episode of that sometime.  

Reviewer: Weetzie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 11:37 am Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

Awesome! Kelly and Ryan are so cute, even if they are miserable a lot of the time. Such a great story!!


Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Angryhaiku Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 05:14 am Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

As always, I just love your Ryan/Kelly dynamic. Kelly is just the right blend of annoying and adorable to make Ryan's attitude of contempt and affection feel natural and interesting.

I love the routine implied in even though things like this never really result in him having to actually put them on, becaue it shows a functionality to their relationship that we haven't actually seen, and it makes them both feel more whole and interesting.



Author's Response: Thank you!  I love that you liked that line in particular because I think that they do have a somewhat functional side to them that we don't see and that they fight but they both know its not that big of a deal.  Thanks!!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 04:38 am Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

Can I say that it took me a few minutes to figure out why you were saying deleted scenes from ABC... and I was like, the office airs on NBC.
Jews For Jesus. I don't celebrate any religious holiday... I just share in the giving and getting of presents religion... does that sound greedy? Oh well.
And all kids hate thier parents. It is basically, you do the best you can and hope you have enough saved for their therapy (a badly messed up quote)
So good that there is a happy (although possibly slightly disfunctional) couple in that office. Very awesome way to start my day. And when I typed awesome I suddenly felt myself reminded of Kelly, even though I say it all nonKellyish

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: Lenore Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 10:02 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

This story is PERFECT.  And here's why:

1)“You do what you gotta do.”

2)"Excuse my language, but that would be a fucking hot baby.”

 3)“No, I haven’t heard it. I seriously can’t even listen to Usher anymore, and if I have to watch that movie where the babies talk to each other one more time I’m gonna… I’m sorry. What was the question?”

4) His mother mouths the words “I like her” to him from across the table and he tightens his lips, not really sure whether that’s to keep himself from frowning or from smiling.

You really found their voices perfectly, without passing judgement on either of them, which was lovely.  Not to mention the last line is a JEWEL. 

Nicely done!



Author's Response: Thank you sooo much!! Really, I love hearing what parts you liked (the fucking hot baby has to be my favorite I think because I'm a loser and actually laughed as I wrote it).  Thanks again!

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 08:55 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

How is this so perfect?? It's so ridiculously in-character that I read the whole thing with Kelly & Ryan voices in my head, which usually doesn't happen automatically. And I was giggling at pretty much everything.

Adored this--for the story and for a story that doesn't involve Jim/Pam :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm so glad that you could hear their voices, I always worry about going over the top with Kelly so that is awesome to hear!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 08:30 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

LOL @ "Do we have any duct tape?"  This story was so much fun.  I love it.


Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 07:54 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

No, YOU'RE adorable!  I totally love this.  Especially that last line. And please, write aaaalllll the Ryan/Kelly and Ryan/anyone and Kelly anything that you can!  I will read it all :)

Author's Response: Heee, thank you! And don't worry, I'm sure there will be much more Ryan/Kelly, Ryan/everyone to come, muahaha. 

Reviewer: Bennie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 07:12 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

Gee, I wonder why you picture Ryan as Jewish....;)

This is wonderful and hilarious and this made me laugh for nine years:

“Yeah? Well you didn’t have to say ‘maybe we’re making one of those’ like that. I thought we already talked about saying stuff like that.”

Ahahahaha.  I love you.  That is all.   



Author's Response: Hehehe, ohhh no reason....  Also, I love you back.  Times a thousand.  So there.

Reviewer: janelle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 06:50 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

Their kids would be really cute.  awww 


Author's Response: I know, right?  BJ and Mindy just need to have kids for real just so I can marvel at how adorable they are. 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 06:46 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

Duct tape! I love it. But Kelly would probably insist on flowered duct tape or something. :) I love Ryan being "godfather" to Michael's child--that's so Michael. And your last line is so, so Kelly! This was a fun story.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, Kelly probably would go for that designer duct tape... and then blog about it later.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 06:38 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

Fun read! I always enjoy exasperated-but-he-loves-her-anyway Ryan. It's sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you!  Their relationship is so fun to observe (maybe not as much fun to be IN, but who knows, hahah)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 06:35 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

Aw, man, I am getting so tired of the Jam angst that I am becoming a Ryan/Kelly shipper!!!  And you are to blame!

Love how the talking heads set off each section.  You Rock. 



Author's Response: Yay Ryan/Kelly shipping!! And, no, I'm sorry, YOU rock ;)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 06:20 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

But she kisses him on the cheek and shuts up about it, like he actually said something right for a change. It isn’t until the next morning when he’s in the shower that he realizes that he said “our.”  - wonderful!

I love those ABC deleted scenes also - "You're perfect!" is so sweet. 

You've gotten everyone on such a Ryan bandwagon.  We have more Ryan/Pam and also a Ryan/Angela!  (Even though we know he's one of the people she hates most in this world...)

It's nice that you have Ryan with Kelly for a change! I won't get too comfortable with that, though.

Hey, what if Jim had given Ryan Katy's number when he asked for it in E-mail Surveillance?  For some reason, I'm slightly fascinated with Katy. 



Author's Response: Ahaha, yeah I love Ryan and Kelly together so there will be more of that to come (plus, Ryan/ANYONE, muahah).  Speaking of Katy/Ryan, miss_bennie just wrote an AMAZING Ryan/Katy fic that's posted on LJ (I recc'ed it in the TWoP thread recently) So definitely check that out!  

Reviewer: Bailey08 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 06:16 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

I think you already know how much I love it when you write Ryan/Kelly.  But, have I told you that you're awesome today?  Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I feel like you're my fellow Ryan/Kelly fanatic so that is great to hear ;)

Reviewer: GodInThisChilis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 06:12 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

It took me a while to get past the first talking head because I was laughing so hard. This is awesome!

Author's Response: Ah! I'm so glad you liked the first part because that was what inspired the entire story.  I wrote that out one day and just thought I HAVE to write a fic around this.  Thank you!!

Reviewer: juteux Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 06:03 pm Title: are you having fun in this relationship?

To quote Kelly, AMAZING!!! I think the Ryan/Kelly relationship is such a great part of the show, and how he genuinely seems to have feelings for her. You brought that out in a really great, sweet way. And ha, Kelly is so the boss in that relationship. 

Author's Response: Thank you!! Yeah, Kelly definitely has him wrapped around her finger I think, as much as he'd like to think otherwise ;)

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