Date: May 01, 2007 05:49 am Title: between how it is and how it should be
If he’s dead either way, he knows in which way he would rather go.
I really like the voice you've created for Jim here. It sounds like him and really gets into his head. They're so sweet together and complement each other so perfectly. I like that you have their breakthrough come without many words- so much of what makes them special is unspoken.