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Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2018 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up

I love this story! Great little moments that show progression of their relationship in playful sexy ways. Absolutely wonderful and one of my new faves!

Reviewer: PBJam Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2014 11:37 am Title: Chapter 5 - The month before he proposes

I want so much more of this..... or pleaaaase expand on one of them

Reviewer: Gabby923 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2009 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The month before he proposes

Great chapters. Very inventive yet subtle.

Reviewer: Emilys List Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: November 03, 2007 10:01 am Title: Chapter 4 - First week of dating

this whole series totally rocks the house but i am simply dying for #7. cute, in character, amazing. i love that your pam is a siren in some ways, or a minx, or something else that's slutty in a classy way. this is great!

Reviewer: Jam01 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up

Wait! That's it!? It Can't Be! More More More!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 06:08 am Title: Chapter 5 - The month before he proposes

How can you end it like that? Evil :)

Reviewer: Pam Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The month before he proposes

This is so good.  I really like the format that you've chosen with breaking each section up into 10 parts.  Please keep giving us more!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2007 10:25 am Title: Chapter 5 - The month before he proposes

Oh my.  So hard to pick a favorite (TWSS!  No time!  But she did!)  Oh please tell us there will be a sequel!  I will scream 'Fire' unless Jim does more naughty things to Pam.  Or something.

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2007 09:12 am Title: Chapter 5 - The month before he proposes

SQUEE!  I have loved this story from beginning to end.  There are so many good ones!  I love that they can each be taken separately but they hook together, too.  Kind of like how a string of related sonnets is called a garland...I wonder what these would be called.  Well, whatever it is, I love it.  :)

This was hilarious:

“Oooh, nice. I can see into the neighbor’s yard from here.”

Hee!  I love that the humor extends into every part of their relationship, because I think it honestly will be like that if they (WHEN!  I mean when!!) hook up. Which is why they need to just do it already on the show.

Anyway, huge rambling review, but the crux of it is: I loved this fic.  So much fun, and so "satisfying."  (TWSS) 

Reviewer: annagirl93 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2007 07:41 am Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up

okay, i know you were only going to do 5 chapters, but is there any way you can extend it? this is such a great series!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 4 - First week of dating

You, Ms. Muggins, are a saucy delight!

 

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 4 - First week of dating

HEE!  LOVE it. My favorite, you ask?  The one about Pam in the morning.  :)

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The week after the break-up

“Oh good! That means I don’t have to go naked..." Rock ON with your bad self, Pam/Muggins!  Mind if I use that line next time I have a surprise, last minute date?  Once again with the funny...

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 4 - First week of dating

Oh. My. GOD. This is the best thing since... ever! Seriously, I am even more in love. This is just... perfection. Almost part five! *dances*

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 08:42 am Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up

Muggins said: Jim's belt looks kind of on the ground with his pants and boxers Explain to me again why you're not writing fanfic? I could so see you writing a fic where you are Andy (or Ryan or Kelly or hell any tertiary character) describing Jim and Pam's first blurry moment. If you don't do it, I will.

All yours, girlfriend.  Or should I say, "Go there, girlfriend!" (I'd say don't go there, but that would be lame.)

I actually am working on a 5 times thing with uncgirl, but it's in the past.  I can't see myself writing a speculative Pam/Jim thing.  But I love to read them, which is why I'm urging you to go there.  See, you've already started forming an idea in your mind.  Andy goes back to the office to collect his banjo, left behind in a mistaken attempt to woo Angela (as it turned out, that truly was "fun for no one").  After that, it's like a game of Clue.  We know it's Jim and Pam, but what room?  What position?  Clue, The Muggins and Kev Smutty Version.  HEY!  There's your title.  I'll be the bestest beta, then I can be in the title.  In the... footnotes?  And I challenge you to put in the line "Angela:  the other white meat."  It's gonna be zoppity. 

 

 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 08:09 am Title: Chapter 4 - First week of dating

Very cute chapter

Reviewer: annagirl93 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 08:04 am Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up

ahhh. dying of cuteness. so awesome. please continue.

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 07:50 am Title: Chapter 4 - First week of dating

I think Jim can handle the homework. 

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 07:45 am Title: Chapter 3 - The week after the break-up

Yay for the hookup!!!  This was the bomb:

“Try me,” Pam challenges. He wants to…very, very badly.

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 07:42 am Title: Chapter 2 - Mid Breakup

Whee!  So much fun!  I love #8: "...would you drink this for me?  Pretty please?"  Hee!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 07:38 am Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up

Ha! This is great.  I love Pam being a sexy flirt.  Good for her!

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 07:05 am Title: Chapter 4 - First week of dating

I adore number 7.  *sigh*

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 05:50 am Title: Chapter 4 - First week of dating

How is Jim carrying a condom in his wallet so freaking hot? (Hell, even Jim dressed as Dwight is hot...)

Author's Response: Everything Jim does is freaking hot. Name anything and I can make Jim doing it freaking hot. Seriously. You are challenged. Go all out. Because, yeah, I need to be writing more fanfic.....

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 05:27 am Title: Chapter 4 - First week of dating

I like #7 the best.  It's so sweet.  I think I like Jim best of all the guys I haven't dated.   I love her answer to that, also!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 04:41 am Title: Chapter 3 - The week after the break-up

Ooh, that most certainly was a nice "date". Go Pam!

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