9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1
I had missed this fic when you initially published it. It broke my heart. Let's hope they see the light before it comes to this...
Author's Response: It still breaks my heart. I hope it never comes to this - for JAM or anyone. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1
That was sad.:(
Author's Response: Yes, it is. Let's hope it never happens in "real life"!
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a lovely story and very true to life...I can't tell you how many times I've googled past boyfriends. I love the Pam Anderson problem...that would be so true. LOL
Author's Response: Thanks JodithGrace. That means a lot, coming from you! Glad you liked the Pam Anderson reference. Made me smile amidst the sadness.
9 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2006 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, it's heartbreaking. This is the quiet desperation, isn't it? Beautiful job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 08:07 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW. That is absolutely heartbreaking and yes, so frighteningly real. It's just...again, heartbreaking and subtle. (And by the way, i did laugh right out loud at the comment about Scranton being closed and the various Civil Rights groups.) Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for picking up on that. Tried to sneak in a few smiles amongst the angst.
9 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 02:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, the angst! Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words!
9 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2006 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, this was so heartbreaking, but so well-written. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
8 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2006 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Pam. Great writing. Is it sad that I have done this looking for people from my past? I have found a few, too, though I am 100% happy with my choices.
Author's Response: I've done it too, thus the inspiration (but that's where the similarity between us ends.)
10 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2006 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a fantastic first fic! So sad, but very realistic about how their lives might turn out. "love, understanding, support, passion, a partner"... poor Pam. Please continue!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to continue!
10 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2006 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
very nice, i love the reflection on how they turned out without each other.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your feedback.
10 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2006 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. "I have a solid husband who has good job and doesn’t cheat on me or abuse me" That really is awful if that's the best thing she can say, isn't it? So sad.
Author's Response: It is sad, isn't it? Thanks for picking up on that detail.
10 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2006 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really good. Sad, but in a good way :) I hope that you continue this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hopefully future chapters will make you less sad.
Date: July 26, 2006 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
*Sniff* Well done, missy!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2006 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this was really sad. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks, Pixel. I appreciated your comments a lot!
8 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2006 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Welcome to the club!! I think you've heard enough from me but...
sniff, sniff. Adore, adore. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your help. You helped me bring this story to the level it's at.
10 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2006 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so beautifully heartbreakng. And so very well written that I actually felt my heart shatter as I read about his marriage and 2 kids. Awesome first story and I hope you write more.
Author's Response: Yeah, my heart broke a little when I wrote it. Still does when I re-read it.
9 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2006 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
.....Jenn! :-O
This was heart-breaking. It didn't tug at my heart-strings, it freaking yanked them the hell out. So. Wow. WOW.
I beg and plead you to write happy fic now. :) This was fantastic.
Author's Response: Thanks, Ham and Cheese! I appreciate everything you said. I'm working on a second chapter, hopefully happier, now!