Reviews For Eleven Dollars
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Reviewer: MaryESP Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2021 05:21 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

You write funny banter so well!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2021 09:24 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

Oooooh, I love this, because we definitely needed to get Pam's reaction to this prank, and this would have been beautiful.

Reviewer: pigeon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 07:14 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

Sweet! The e-mails were my favorite, but I think the whole thing had a nice flow to it, especially at a time in the show when the whole love triangle situation was getting tiresome anyway. I liked they way you didn't go too over the top with declarations of love, but still got the point across. It made it feel more authentic. Thanks for this!

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 02:49 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

Excellent writing.  Very funny as well!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 05:34 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

Dwim was a fantastic opening and closing. Way to much fun.

I love the little detail that the camera crew was laughing about it.

Oh, and Jim's inner geek is totally hot. I don't care, anything with Jim in it is totally hot. That man can do no wrong.

And that Jim's morning is complete because of Pam's email - just mentioning that I love that,

Go forward Pam... FNB it is!

Oh yes, best eleven dollars ever. Or in my case, best few minutes spent reading a fic in the most recent few minutes (sorry, I can't play favorites and I have read a LOT of good ones today. but this was one of the best ones, I will say that).

I love your stories. Have I said that recently? Cause I do (sorry, that sounds like a friends quote or something)

Author's Response: You are so funny, Emily!  And I'm glad you liked it.  And you know what?  I was reading the TWop fanfic board today and I suddenly remembered that I never replied to your in-depth squirrel analysis you mailed me like 3 months ago!!  In my defense, you sent it the very weekend I was in Los Angeles, so it got read and enjoyed while there, but pushed over to the "I'll defintely have to respond when I get home and have more time."  I'm so sorry about that!!  But I was sooo overwhelmed that you too so much time to write about something *I* wrote.  You are something else, Emily - and I mean that in a GOOD way!!  :-)

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2007 12:36 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

Another fantastic and hilarious story! I'd kill to read about her reaction to Dwight's inner Halper.

Reviewer: jillyree Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 06:17 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

This story was so well written and so in character.  Dare I say it was "DAWESOME"?  I loved it, and I am adding yet another story to my favorites!  Great Job!

Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2007 11:32 am Title: A Prankster Master Class

THAT WAS GREAT! That was funny and sweet and really believable...I wish it had happened! Boy, I wanna strangle those two.... They're the only two people on earth that doesn't realize that they are in love with each other. Anyway, great story and very well written. "culpable believability" is my new favorite term.

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 08:13 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

Aw!  They're so cute I've developed a cavity!  :)

I wish there'd been JAM like this in the episode.  I really needed it, and they totally blew me off.  This time, it's personal!  (It's not really personal.  I'm just sayin'.) 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 07:34 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

"Dwim Schrupert" - so adorable, as was this story! The roof was a great choice, not just for the memories, but to give them a chance to talk without being interrupted by Karen.

Reviewer: ladama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 06:24 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

Thank you for this, it makes me feel better about an otherwise JAM-less episode. I loved how you had Pam tell Jim how she feels by using the word "appreciate" rather than "love" (she's not quite brave or bold enough to say "love" at this point, even if she feels it).

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 05:53 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

Now, whoever would have guessed Dwight would be the one to bring Jim & Pam together?  I love how bold (is bold the right word?) Pam was with "Dwim"  and the comment about having Dwight coming in dressed as Jim was great.  Loved it.

Reviewer: Keds Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 05:12 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

Moxie, what I love most about this story is that Pam simply tells Jim that he has an option.  No demand for an answer immediately, or she gets out of Dodge.  I would really love to see it play out this way on my TV screen.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 03:56 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

Best. Cold open. Ever. And I love that you felt compelled to write about, and to make it a Jam-happy moment. Email me if you want the Bears, Beets, Battlestar Galactica wallpaper I made. With proper fonts and everything.

Reviewer: StarShine Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 03:06 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

DAWSOME. Seriously, what IS it about Dwim that makes him so hot? It probably is the forearms... Love it as always!

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 02:42 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

okay so i'm sitting here at my desk, at work, simply...gooshing with fluffy jamness.  And every once in a while I let out a giggle or a squee of delight, and I thank god no one else is here right now.  Thank you.

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 02:10 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

:thunderous applause:: that was fantastic.  And a get together without one single accusation or raised voice? i love it.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 01:21 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

Wow, a flirty and courageous Pam.  I like it.  That was so nice and sweet, because you just know Pam fully appreciates the extent of Jim's creative mind! :)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 12:42 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

I adore this.  And you know what I adore most?  That his lips were chapped when she kissed him.

Weird?  Maybe.  But completely true.   A triumph Ms. Moxie. ;)

Reviewer: comiskey Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 12:39 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

That was great.  I loved the e-mails back and forth.  If only that's what actually happened.  I think I'll imagine that it was :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 12:12 pm Title: A Prankster Master Class

I love this- all of it. But this line especially hit me: Her courage now completely used up, she slipped past him and headed toward the stairwell door. Poor Pam, trying so hard to be Fancy and New- but courage and honesty are still not her strong points, and they take so much from her. I love it!

Reviewer: Night Swept Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 11:47 am Title: A Prankster Master Class

I second sharky's sentiment.  The ten years line is perfect.  Everything right with Pam and everything wrong with Karen.  

Reviewer: sharky Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 10:02 am Title: A Prankster Master Class

"There are people in this world who truly appreciate you for all the things you are right now, not who you might be in ten years. Please don't think you have to change to be happy."

What a great line! Love love love it!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 09:31 am Title: A Prankster Master Class

Yay!  Eleven dollars!!  I love how through fanfic, we can take any scenario and follow it through to it's natural conclusion of Happy Jamness -- unlike some people we know (Greg Daniels!).

Reviewer: GodInThisChilis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 09:17 am Title: A Prankster Master Class

Loved this...so cute and in character. I just hope this doesn't turn into a weird thing for Jim and Pam. You know, "Honey, we've been married 11 years....do I still have to put on the glasses before coming to bed?"

 Fantastic story.

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